All is Caged in Aquarius

Is it coming?

Come to
The waters
How evil it is
So it is with life
To bleed with reservation
To ween what deserves it

Come to the water
Comes up from the waters
Like unborn my daughters
Shall sleep in the barley

Come to the water
Blindness is willingly
Comes up from the waters
And never be loved again

What springs forth in lights
The chosen once of friends
Until forgiven from empathy
Unbridled offerings entropy
A new enemy comes alive
Comes up from the waters

Come to
The waters
How evil it is
So it is with life
To dream with hesitation
To seem what purpose is

Come to the water
Comes up from the waters
My unwanted step fathers
Creeping the wilderness

Come to the water
Blindness is willingly
Sinking under the waters
To never be found again

Waiting for her motherless
Torment come home to her
For anything better or inside
Orbit anything super collider
A new enemy comes alive
Comes up from the waters

And ever has she been fatherless
But never has she cried or wished
Because she knows to go blissful
And has always been sold gristle
So like the knives made of nightshade
Looking over their shoulders or surviving
Until the endlessness comes to take them

Come to the water
Comes up from
Underneath us
These waters
Comes into
The water

And the
Waters
In me

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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

great symbolism, will you please explain the significance of water on the life of the girl?thank you...


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blake4d 4 years ago from Now Rising Out of Phoenix Arizona Earthlings Author

Ummm it comes I suppose from subtle things from my own personal life, my own daughter and I have had some long deep conflicts that remain unresolved. It also is I suppose, my turning the Aquarius symbol of the water bearer but relating it to a feminine principle. A lot of my writings, i relay my poetic ideas with a female character, although they maybe coming from my male experiences. I hope that kind of answers your questions Raciniwa. Thanx for reading and commenting. Keep on Hubbing. Blake4d


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yoginijoy 4 years ago from Mid-Atlantic, USA

What an ominous tone! I enjoyed your parallelism of water, blindess and fatherlessness of the young girl. It is quite scary to imagine that she is moving so rapidly towards what can only be death. "Is it coming?" Who asks this? the youth or another prophetic voice? Great poem!


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blake4d 4 years ago from Now Rising Out of Phoenix Arizona Earthlings Author

Keep on Hubbing. Blake4d


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bibi16 4 years ago from Phoenix Arizona

Really different. Like it or love it. LOL!

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