The Call Of The Sea (limerick)

The old man returned to the sea

In answer to its memory

What soft haunting whim

Was beckoning him

Why girls clad in swim suits smiled he


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

MH,

This one was awesome! :)


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Curiad 4 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

He He!


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

That will be me in a few years....sigh! LOL...love it!


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TToombs08 4 years ago from Somewhere between Heaven and Hell without a road map.

MH, you dirty old man! :) LOL! Great limerick! Made me laugh. :)


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

hahaha!! great one!


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girishpuri 4 years ago from NCR , INDIA

lol... great share


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

Some men never change, do they? Suckers for those young things in bikinis! Good one and voted up.


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LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

lol, lol..... I won't say anything! :)

Impressive, Mike!


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myownlife 4 years ago from london

wow, beautiful concept

great image

exceptional delivery.

Great.


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midget38 4 years ago from Singapore

LOL! I'm sure the girls were the big draw, MHatter! Cute limerick, which I will give my votes to!


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

At least he is honest!


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Jools99 4 years ago from North-East UK

Ha Ha MMhatter, of course - he was looking for mermaids in their bikinis :o)


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

Oh he was enjoying mother nature and more.


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Patty Kenyon 4 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

LOL, this was too funny...the first part, I was thinking awww, how beautiful...the ending was really funny!!!!!


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

HeeHee, Loved it, That dirty old man. Ha


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Old men have to have some pleasure too.


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coffeegginmyrice 4 years ago from Toronto, Ontario

The sight of girls in swim suits tickled him.


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HaleyMCruz 4 years ago from California

Haha I knew this was going to turn silly, but I wasn't expecting that. Put a silly smile on my face and made me giggle :)

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