Calling Return (tanka)

In my quiet time

I hear its calling return

Over a vast field

Which was lightly set aside

In a dream I left undone

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bravewarrior 23 months ago from Central Florida

Martin, I can so relate this to my life, both personal and professional. I have many ideas sitting in a folder just waiting for me to bring them to life. The problem is, I've temporarily lost my zest. It'll come back - I know it will. I have reminders waiting for me when that happens.

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billybuc 23 months ago from Olympia, WA

So much beauty crammed in so few words. Nicely done, Martin.

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jhamann 23 months ago from Reno NV

I am happy to read your work on Hubpages, your words have been enlightening to me. I hope you are well. Jamie

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Faith Reaper 23 months ago from southern USA

Another thought-provoking beauty here, Mh!

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Blessings always

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travmaj 23 months ago from australia

Lovely work Martin - you sure are a poet.

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annart 23 months ago from SW England

Mystical and intriguing!


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vkwok 22 months ago from Hawaii

Simply wonderful, Martin.

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