Caskets and Cocoons

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a short poem

It’s getting real early and I’m trying to sleep.

In 30 more minutes my alarm will beep.

I don’t want to get up and face the day,

the lights so bright it pushed the night away.

So I stay in the same place I’ve always been,

my cocoon so cozy, where I don’t need to pretend.

It keeps me huddled in everything that I know,

where my dreams and memories have a place to go.

‘Cause I know a world uncontrolled but contained,

to my hopes, past, future, and brain,

where laughs are amassed until the nightmares rain,

Cause even dreams scream with a little bit of pain.

So I awake from that nightmarish hole,

slide jeans on and push my heels to the sole.

Cause there’s more to life than sitting in rooms.

We all have to awake from our caskets and cocoons.


© 2012 Brian M. Loewer All rights reserved.


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LVidoni5 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon Author

Yeah I wrote it when I was at the same point. Thanks for the comment and reading Christine. It's much appreciated.


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Christine P Ann 4 years ago from Australia

Reminds me of a time when I was very depressed and it was an effort to face the day, a very emotional piece :)


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LVidoni5 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon Author

Thanks so much Verita. I'm glad you liked it. Those are probably my favorite lines too.


V Qisya 4 years ago

My favorite lines,"cause I know a world..little bit of pain".

Beautiful piece! I loved it, Brian. Up and away :D

Best Wishes, V


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LVidoni5 5 years ago from Portland, Oregon Author

Indeed! Thanks for reading AmaTainted.


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AmaTainted 5 years ago from Texas

and he emerges a butterfly!

beautiful!


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LVidoni5 5 years ago from Portland, Oregon Author

Very true Ebower... thanks for the great compliments and stopping by!


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Ebower 5 years ago from Georgia

This is a reminder that we all should truly live intentionally and with purpose as we were created to do so instead of shirking into the backround and coasting when we should be living each day as it was our last. I voted this up and awesome, because of the poignant message and excellent writing.


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LVidoni5 5 years ago from Portland, Oregon Author

I never thanked you for the great comment Poohgranma! Yeah, it can be tough breaking from those places of comfort or even darkness into the light of the world again.


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Poohgranma 5 years ago from On the edge

I really like this, the parts and the whole of it. I can almost here a melody behind it. It's Universal, something every person can relate to and it also carries a message that we need to apply, even at times when we don't want to.

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