You Take My Heart Away

YOU TAKE MY HEART AWAY

You take my heart away by the look in your eyes,

I see myself in them and some sweet insights,

Emotions shining bright, your intentions for our

Stronger romantic bonding are just right!

You see me the way you would have touched me,

And I melt at that moment by the heat in your

Sight.


You take my heart away by the way you hold my hands,

I feel your companionship and an assurance of lasting

Solace,

Those walks with you in solitaire,

So close you are to me and I have no fears.

The moments of these feelings I want you to know,

How my heart is reeling

And I just know you’ll be with me always,

For us to have “long-lasting, happy days”.


You take my heart away when you grip me by my

Waist,

You touch me slowly and make no haste,

I’m taking in your scent and there’s no time to waste,

You are so close to me, yet the distance seems so great!

To come nearer to you, I can’t wait.

Wanna know the effect of these little escapades?

That we’ll always be one in love like this,

And you are my Soulmate.


You take my heart away when you listen to my talks,

To whatever I say, about the happenings of the day,

And do not just judge me and walk away,

When you let me glimpse into what is on your mind,

And in your heart,

Things which made you smile, and problems which you

Dart.

Your intentions to just let it be, or to act upon and

Make a new Start!


You take my heart away when you do things which

Make you special,

When you let me know How Special I AM!

About unique characteristics which make me, and

That Special I always will be. J

Be it leaving a rose on my bed-side every morning,

Or cooking breakfast on Sundays and Dinner on some

Week-days too,

.I love it when you show its OUR Home, and share the

Duties on our ‘Cleanliness-Drive Days’,


You take my heart away when you endeavour

to make me independent,

Not leaving me alone still, like always,

Calling my friends for party on my Birthday,

Or arranging for just the two of us on other special

Occasions.

Be it the gift of a vacation or some other costly possession,

It always mirrors you and your love for me.

So I promise to pour my cup of love & care on you,

As its your way, till the end of our ‘Earthly Stay’.


-Charu Bhatnagar


I had created this Poem to submit in a Competition of Romantic Poetry. Every one have their own idea and experiences in and about Romance, Love. In creating this poetry, all I had to do was remember and feel all that which was my idea of perfect love relationship, perfect romance, my dreams. I live my life and dreams through poetry and I guess this one poem has become one of the all time favorite creations of mine. :-)I am curious to get others' feedback, in order to improve myself in future. :)

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ruby 5 years ago

lovely.


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Denise Handlon 5 years ago from North Carolina

See-and I thought you had a problem writing poetry, LOL No problem here that I can see at all. Rated up/awesome and beautiful. Very cool! Keep writing...more, more, please.


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Charu Bhatnagar 5 years ago from India Author

@Denise Handlon: -

Thank you so-2 much for lovely feedback. :-) I was a little hesitant at first to start blogging and publishing my work online. I thought I was not good enough for that, but now that my aim is to learn, I will try and publish more frequently. :-)


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SimeyC 5 years ago from NJ, USA

Charu: you need to add the tag 'content' to your hub so it is entered in the competition! Welcome to Hubpages and good luck with the competition! Great start.....


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Charu Bhatnagar 5 years ago from India Author

@SimeyC: -

Thank you so much for that tip. I am new here, so can you please help me out, as to how do I tag after my work is published?


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Pearldiver 5 years ago from Tomorrow - In Words & NZ Time.

This is a nice effort Charu.. Don't be afraid to write from the heart. It is that very ability that makes the difference between average and great poetry. To be able to add new tags on your work - go into edit mode and then to the control panel in the right column of your hub and click it onto 'Tag' - then add them. There you can also write a summary of your work which will be seen on the search engines. Good Luck. Write more.


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Charu Bhatnagar 5 years ago from India Author

@Pearldiver: -

thank you for those words and also for telling me how to add more tags. :-) I will remember to write from heart. :-)


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Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

When it comes to writing Romantic Poetry you are even more beautiful. If you are entering in hubpages contest add contest as a tag and poems and poetry as the category. Remember even a poem must be 500 words. You may add poet's note to maintain word count.


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Charu Bhatnagar 5 years ago from India Author

Thanks for the tip. :-) I didn't know I need to add 'contest' as a tag too. :D I will now. N about this poem, this poem is very special to me, as I wrote it for just me and my dreams, my perspective of love, and not for any other human being. mayb this is the reason it came out beautifully. :-)


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KoffeeKlatch Gals 5 years ago from Sunny Florida

You take my breath away by the way you write.

Beautiful peotry. Im looking forward to reading more.


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Charu Bhatnagar 5 years ago from India Author

@KoffeeKlatch Gals: -

Thank you so-2 much. These word r really very special. :-)


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Khushi Grover 4 years ago

beautiful


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Charu Bhatnagar 4 years ago from India Author

Thank you dear Khushi. Thanks so much for visiting. :-)


shobhna 4 years ago

bowing down.....:-)


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Charu Bhatnagar 4 years ago from India Author

Thank you Shobhna. :-)

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