'Childhood Wishes?' - A Poem

When I was quite young ...

When I was quite a young girl ~ about 12 or 13 years old ~ a few verses came into my head, one morning, while I was traveling to school on the bus.

I think that I must have been watching the mix of adults and children, and their responses to each other.

It is not real poetry, just a little childhood verse, but the emotion behind it ~ and whatever inspired it ~ still leaves me feeling wistful.

Indeed, as the years disappear, I probably become ever more wistful.

Where does the time go? It seems to fly by ~ and the older we become; the faster it flies.

My poem is below. I hope that you will enjoy reading it.


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'Watching and Thinking'

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An old woman watches children at play.

They are pretending they're married today.

They are pretending they're grown up, 'like Mother'!

Every child thinks much like another.

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"I'll be glad when I'm adult," hear all of them say.

They don't seem to realise they're growing each day.

They don't understand ~ soon enough they'll be old;

And gradually all of their days will unfold.

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The woman remembers her own childhood days,

When she too was wishing for adult ways.

Now she just wishes she were like them, again...

When being 'grown up' was simply a game.

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liftandsoar 4 years ago from Richmond, VA

Thoughtful and honest and, indeed emotional. It's good to read something of yours again. Thanks!


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LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

Trish-M, this is beautiful and a very true picture of life. How we all wish for what we are not :) Very nice flow, and enjoyed it..... Sharing!


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girishpuri 4 years ago from NCR , INDIA

brilliant, memories, and i remember one famous quote, every thing we value ' after loosing it and before getting it' wonderful message, voted up.


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diogenes 4 years ago from UK and Mexico

"True dat, dawg," as our cousins say. But not all the way back: I wouldn't mind being 40 again. Still have all the powers but some maturity, too! Or your age would be great.

Good to see you there again.

Your fellow Limey.

ps/ Just got back from Mexico

Bob


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Trish_M 4 years ago from The English Midlands Author

Hi :) :) :) :)

Diogenes and Liftandsoar ~ thanks; great to 'see' you again!

LaThing and Girishpuri ~ thank you so much!

As I said, it's just a child's verse, but it has stayed with me ~ and the sentiment rings so true. I wonder why I even thought of those things when I was so young :)

I bet Mexico was great, Bob!


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Anil and Honey 4 years ago from Kerala

Very nice poem. I like your simple and beautiful words.You can say many ideas through the simple and lovely words. Thank you very mach I am happy to meet you.


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Trish_M 4 years ago from The English Midlands Author

Hello Anil and Honey :)

Thank you for your kind words. Much appreciated!


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kenneth avery 2 years ago from Hamilton, Alabama

Hi, Trish_M,

Wow! (Pardon the crude exclamation) What a nice work! I loved this while it moved me emotionally to a time when I too, watched my only daughter play the game of "grown-up."

I voted this piece Up and away---very well-done.

I cordially invite you to read just two of my hubs,

"Sunset, I Wonder About You," and "And Old Dreamers Dream," at my place, then be one of my followers.

I would love that.

Sincerely,

Kenneth/ from northwest Alabama


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Trish_M 2 years ago from The English Midlands Author

Hello Kenneth, :)

Thank you so much for those kind words.

I'm already a follower - but I'll have a look at those hubs now :)


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kenneth avery 2 years ago from Hamilton, Alabama

Fantastic, Trish_M . . .for both this wonderful hub and for the following.

You are a great writer with a bright future ahead of you. I sense that about your style of writing.

Thanks too, for looking at my hubs.

Kenneth


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Trish_M 2 years ago from The English Midlands Author

You're very kind, Kenneth :)


Kenneth Avery 2 years ago

Thank you, Trish_M.

So are you. I confess. I can give a compliment better than taking one. But I am working on that.

God bless you for your comment.

Kenneth


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Trish_M 2 years ago from The English Midlands Author

You're welcome :)


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kenneth avery 2 years ago from Hamilton, Alabama

Thank you, dear Trish_M.,

Happy Memorial Day and keep in touch with me.

Kenneth


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RTalloni 19 months ago from the short journey

What a treasure to have from your childhood! I enjoyed your slice-of-life poem very much.

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