By the freedom

Of it all

When sunset came



Love blooming

Newness emerging

A carefree freedom

That cannot be escaped

What it once was

Echoes of laughter

Singing in my head

The warmth of the sun

Transforming us

Into who we became

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Perspycacious 2 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

Not many of us online on Sundays, especially Sunday nights. This was a fine Hub that probably would have had more readers, if published on a weekday. I'm glad to see you are still "one of us" here!

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carolinemd21 2 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Hi Perspy, thank you for your kind comment. I don't think I'll ever stop being here! :)

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btrbell 2 years ago from Mesa, AZ

Beautiful poem and sentiments! Thank you!

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Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

love the poem Caroline.. and those childhood memories do fulfill our adulthood ...:)

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SubRon7 2 years ago from eastern North Dakota

Childhood--oh, the memories!

Thank you, Caroline.

sky9106 2 years ago

Love intoxicated by the it sets up the entire poem........amazing how the ways that we are similar as humans, dwarfs those ways, that we try to be different. I also wrote my Childhood.......Thoughtful here Caroline.

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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois

Childhood, memories that continue to spill over in our adult life. You penned the feeling/excitement so well...Thank you..

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FullOfLoveSites 2 years ago from United States

I wish I were a child all over again... lovely hub :)

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BlossomSB 2 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Lovely to relive the freedom of childhood. Love your poem.

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carolinemd21 2 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you Btrbell for your lovely words. :)

Thank you Frank for stopping by and your kind comment. :)

Thank you Jim, aren't they great? :)

Thank you Sky for stopping by and your kind words. I will read yours too. :)

Thank you Ruby for your lovely words. :)

Thank you FullofLoveSites I wish too. :)

Thank you Blossom for your lovely words and for reading. :)

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Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Life is certainly intoxicating. Childhood memories are always precious. Thanks for the memories.

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carolinemd21 2 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you Rasma you lovely lady. :)

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