Cinderella – a Love Poem by Fehl Dungo

In the darkest part of the club

She was sitting alone

Her raspberry vodka untouched

Humming she befriending the song


I don’t know why

of all the people there

Only she got my attention

I don’t know why

For only ten seconds

Already she broke my heart


On the last shot of Label B

Her tall prince pulled her up

Her raspberry vodka untouched

Crying she left him on the spot


In the darkest corner outside

The night breathed champagne

The sky had her star

Wish I knew your name


I wanna get closer…

I wanna hear your voice

And us hold palm to palm

Wanna be your dream come true

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CC BY ND MichelleCarl Flickr Photostream

Maybe the wind heard my wish


I don’t know why

of all the people there

Only I got her attention

I don’t know why

For only ten seconds

Already I caught her heart


She – the Angel in the night

sent hot chills in my ear

Wants me in her castle

By her side, always near


But I wanna get closer

Want you say my name

Want me your only choice

And us hold palm to palm

Wanna make your dreams come true




© Copyright by Fehl Dungo

To all the princesses especially mine…to my Cathy <3


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Toss and turn…when you’re in cloud nine or when you’re missing someone…whatever the reasons are, you simply toss and turn and your mind can’t stop thinking about who your heart is screaming about…words just can’t stop echoing inside your head…you toss and turn until you let it all out…

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prasetio30 3 years ago from malang-indonesia

Beautiful poem, my friend. I am glad to know this from you. Thanks for writing and share with us. Voted up!


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Most interesting imagination and so well put together.


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cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

Great poem..


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SiberianWolf 3 years ago from MidWest

beautiful with a tender gentle touch... the yearning is palatable...


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flashmakeit 3 years ago from usa

Beautiful poem and very creative! I really enjoyed reading it.


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful, funny how instant attractions occur....


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Oh Fehl, reading this again and again... your words melt me like butter... I love your words here... this Cinderella is a hottie. LOL :P I don't think she is in to Princes, somehow. Hehehe. :P

I love your beautiful imagination. I can sense real things inside the beautiful world here they inhabit... The Sky has her star... I love that line... The heart that longs and years for her, and it answers... this is beautiful...

This Cinderella has heard her Angel and she is her dream come true, honey. :)

The last part is the sweetest words of all... the two are meant to be together, and yes her dream has come true. This is beautiful. Only an Angel could write this loving words. I love your new hub, Fehl. Thank you for dedicating it to me. I want to hug you so much now. Mwaaaaaaaaaah. XOXOXX

I love you Fehl. ^_^


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you... Author

@Prasetio thank you my friend! Giving you a hug for being the first here. :)

@DDE hope this would spark all readers imagination :) Thank you so much.

@Cleaner happy you like it :)

@SiberianWolf How are you? The yearning is so strong it’s always there. It gets stronger when two people yearn each other. Thank you, Wolf. :)

@Flashmakeit I’m so glad you enjoyed reading it. Thanks!

@Ruby that’s always what I get the first time people read it. Then it changed the second time. Then they would feel a lot different at the third read. LOL Thank you so much, Ruby. Have a great day!

@Cathy hi babe! Yes, she is a hottie :) She’s not into princes and vodka. She’s just into me :) hehehe *kisses you*

I’m glad no matter how I wrote this you still felt me… The sky has her star…oh I know why you love that line honey (smiling like crazy now) It’s so beautiful how real love bring two souls find each other. It’s cosmic and powerful…

Oh the words you say here…yes she is her dream come true. Mwaaaaaaaah! I love you, babe ^,^


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acaetnna 3 years ago from Guildford

Completely beautiful and wonderfully written as always too.


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you... Author

I'm so glad you like it Acaetnna. You are beautiful too :)


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epigramman 3 years ago

My fabulous Fehl - you intoxicate me with your words and when the police just pulled me over - they asked if I had been drinking and I said no I have just fallen in love with BLAISE 25's worlds once again - and the officer scratched his forehead and said "What the f-ck?"

Pity him, Fehl, for not seeing the beauty in this world.

Sending you warm wishes from Mr. C and his pussycats of reknown.

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Rosemay50 3 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

A beautifully creative poem.


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you... Author

LOL oh Colin it's too early for Hangover part III hehehe. What a cheerful way to start the morning seeing your comment here :) Sending Mr. C the yummiest latte and warm wishes too. You take care and drive safe ok. :) xx

Happy to see you Rosemay :) Thank you for reading


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Angelme566 3 years ago

Blaise , This is another beautiful and like Astra been saying it's a melting poem..GRRRRRR so beautiful and soothing !

Happy Easter !


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you... Author

Oh wow the angel returns... :) Hello Angel! I missed you! How are you? Grrrrr! :) Hope things are great with you. I'm happy you find this melting and soothing and beautiful. If you are familiar with the OPM song "Prinsesa" I kinda mixed its atmosphere here plus my own...

Happy Easter!


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SMonaghan119 3 years ago from PA

i always appreciated your insight and comments. i created a hub to keep in touch with a few and would appreciate it you joined in on it. hope all is well. take care.


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Dim Flaxenwick 3 years ago from Great Britain

Beautiful poem as are you. Only someone beautiful on the inside could such wonderful words.


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you so much Dim :) You flatter me so much. Have a sweet day!


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Cantuhearmescream 3 years ago from New York

blaise25,

This is beautifully awesome! Do we not want to be responsible for these feelings? Feeling this ourselves is enough to flutter the heart.

Cat


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Theater girl 3 years ago from New Jersey

Heart beating fast! Great descriptive poem!


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Docmo 3 years ago from UK

A beautiful poem. There are so many memorable lines and thoughts here, it does linger long after I finished reading it.... I love this especially...

In the darkest corner outside

The night breathed champagne

The sky had her star

Wish I knew your name


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you... Author

@Cat Thank you. haha Yes the heart is too strong and we end up following it anyway. It's crazy to be in love but it's beautiful. You know this very much :) Cheers!

@Theater Girl nice to meet you here and thank you for liking my hub :)

@Docmo a very beautiful song and longing for someone so special made me write these words. I'm glad you love it. Have a sweet day!


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sariasaeed 2 years ago from u.k

lovely poem


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blaise25 2 years ago from close to you... Author

Aww thank you. :)


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Berni G 4 weeks ago

lovely :)

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