Cloaked Beneath

 

Cloaked beneath the shadiness

No exposure given with loveliness

Excluded from all perception

Led into ones visual conception

 

Held into the light with given formation

Blossomed and flourished with mutation

Unbearable to the eye grasped with touch

Nourished with sense consumed by much

 

Underlying daybreak deemed by devotion

Caressed quietly expressing emotion

Transported within the bared hand

Releasing its essence at ones command

 

Spoken to in soft tune thirsting no longer

Watchful of its transformation secured stronger

Empowered by determination

Exhausted in reach of elation  

 

 

bellawitter23(copyright)2011

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mckbirdbks 5 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

Bold!


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Birdie, Thanks :)

smiles :)

bella


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

You are so eloquent with your words. Beautiful.


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Mentalist acer 5 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

In Earned Elation,Of Course,with my standing Ovation!;)


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Ace, Thank you very much always look forward to reading your thoughts on my art.

Acer, lol thanks pal your the bestest!

smiles :)

bella


tnderhrt23 5 years ago

Powerful write from a powerful source!


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Thanks tnder! I appreciate the comment as always ....

smiles :)

bella


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h.a.chauhdary 5 years ago from Australia

the shroud of falsehood. amazing!


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Genna East 5 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

When I saw this photo, it reminded me of the cloak that Bryce Dallas wore in The Village. Beautiful words.

“Exhausted in reach of elation…” This one blew me away. Up and beautiful.


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bbnix 5 years ago from Southern California

A cloak of strong Will beside you

Yet empty to feel something to belong to

A true friend to be sure, a passion so pure

An exposure mutation elation it is true

There is nothing you can't reach, the sweetest to teach

And still one can't help but hope to be near you

A lightest friends touch, one might steal as too much

Yet a friendship must confess one's heart to be true

It is all as quite simple for this man has no pickle

It's only that friendship can fly as the sky's blue

So transform you must, a dear friend to trust

For your sweet determined and long blessed elation


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

H, thanks a bunch for stopping by!!

Genna never seen seen the village I thought this image went well with the poem thanks genna I appreciate your kind words always!!

bb, I can never go by without reading your beauty in flipping my poems and making them about me this is truly an honor as always :)

smiles :)

bella


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Bumpsysmum 5 years ago from Cambridgeshire

Simply beautiful bellawritter23, loved the flow and the hidden meanings :-)


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Truckstop Sally 5 years ago

Your words exude such strength... Beautiful!

Watchful of its transformation secured stronger

Empowered by determination

Exhausted in reach of elation


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

bumpsys, thank you yes lots of hidden meaning indeed I am happy they reached you!!

Sally, Thank you very much yes strength I guess has been on my side lately lol :)

smiles :)

bella


Johnny Love 5 years ago

Smile lovely Lady. quite the gift of pen. Love to read your words. amazing you are


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Johnny, thanks pal my pen can write sometimes......

smiles :)

bella


Johnny Love 5 years ago

I actually used a pen the other day and I must say, it was strange. Oh and i love the ink on your skin, pain is love and love is ink. or something.


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Yeah I very seldom use an actual pen... but thanks yes pain is love and love is pain and ink marking the pain...


Johnny Love 5 years ago

WOW, I like this view much more. i miss the feeling. love the pain you show. blessings.


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

lol yes pain can be shown through my bitterness at times with myself but hey its what makes up our character....


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youmeget 5 years ago

This is lovely bella, I enjoy reading it.

youmeget


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

You, Thank you very much!!

smiles :)

bella

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