Cloudburst Of Color

 This hub is dedicated to Gus The Red Neck who challenged me on this concept so here it is Mr. Gus Gus, I hope it meets your standards......

 

 

As they trickle from sky the heaven

Falling in form one through seven

Onto an arc made of white

Adding pigments stained so bright

 

Falling together full of grace

Splashing in uniform nicely in place

As the fluffy white clouds travel along

Humming and chirping a colorful song

 

Coating the arc with magical colors

White so little now getting smaller

The arc reaching so far way up high

Like a band of colors way in the sky

 

As the raindrops dance on top the arc

Creating a sight in the eye that sparks

As it places its tiny feet to step

As it travels along skipping its pep

 

Extending its wavelength ray of light

Painting it pretty what a beautiful sight

Raindrops filled with saturation

What a rewarding glowing translation

 

What started so tiny in liquid scheme

Evaded into a burst of a color beam

A rainbow that grew out of rain

Claiming the skies as its home domain

 

bellawritter23(copyright)2011

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h.a.chauhdary 5 years ago from Australia

i feel as if i'm in rainbows after reading this! awesome.


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

H, lol yay mission accomplished!!!!

smiles :)

bella


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tnderhrt23 5 years ago

Another vivid, colorful poem, bella! You are just so good at this poetry thing!!!


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Mentalist acer 5 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

A perfect bud of illumination Balla.;)


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Tnder, Thank you my dear lady!!

Acer, A flower to blossom it is woo hoo....

smiles :)

bella


UrsulaRose 5 years ago

WOW ... give yourself a pat on the back Bella this poem is simply up there with the best of them.

You are a true wordsmith ... you have 'the gift' so do not let anyone take it away from you. :-)


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mannyrolando 5 years ago

very nice and I love the photos!


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bbnix 5 years ago from Southern California

From the land of primary colors, a pot of god for our lovely Ms. Bella. It seems as quite clear that puffy white spheres tell a sweet tune of "sparkles" and "glowing translation."

Ahhh, a poem of rich color for us artists - thank you, thank you!!!


Johnny Love 5 years ago

I find the colors are more than what you say. Hiding beneath this facade of images born in rain. I love this one a lot.


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Bumpsysmum 5 years ago from Cambridgeshire

Ah bellawritter23, what a lovely use of words and the illustrations are awesome too :-)


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

beautiful and colorful! one of my fave by u. you should get challenged more often.


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Ursula, You are to kind but I have all my fellow hubbers that do it for me lol without you guys to crtic my work I feel I would be just a lost soul trying to speak but I appreciate the comment it means a great deal to me......

Manny, Thank you very much I think the images make the poem!!

bb, Thank you Sir Will. eeeeekkkkk you always come back with something no other way to put it but romantic in a sense and I appreciate the devotion to my hubs.......

Johnny, Thank you colors can do a number on one, if one allows itself....

Bumpsys, Thank you very much I will be by very soon to read your work....

Nikki, For some odd reason I tend to do that who knows why.... lol >_<

smiles all :)

bella


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Bumpsysmum 5 years ago from Cambridgeshire

I thank you bellawritter23 and I look forward to your visits always :-)


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GusTheRedneck 5 years ago from USA

Hi Bella - Now, how did I know that this would be so remarkably fine a poem? I did - and it was. Everyone who read it and commented thought so, too. I'm happy for someone who can do such good writing.

Gus :-)))


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Gus apparently alot think I work better under pressure, so when you got me anoter challenge let me have it this was so much fun thank you all for you Sir Gus!!

smiles :)

bella


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Fossillady 5 years ago from Saugatuck Michigan

I can tell from reading the comments you're feeling proud of meeting the challenge Gus gave you...keep up the creative work Bella


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jwmurph 5 years ago from Tennessee

lovely poem,,,lots of color, feeling, and meaning


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Lady, A challenge is always great I think I find it working under pressure can be quite great for me!!

Jw, Thank you I felt the same way!!

smiles :)

bella

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