Clouds (a Haiku)

A fine symphonic music flows...
A fine symphonic music flows...
As the rooster crows...
As the rooster crows...
The mighty eagle flies...
The mighty eagle flies...
Angel singing in the skies...
Angel singing in the skies...



In clouds, we find art,

Radiant blue sky, a part.

Clouds are revealing.


Clouds brighten our day,

Shapely sculptures on display.

Above... earth's ceiling.


In clouds, found relief,

Locomotives...Maple leaf..

Shapes... our thoughts, reeling.


Clouds reshape our minds,

Fond sanctuary one finds.

Of our lives...dealing.


There birds, flying free,

In bright clouds, we'd rather be.

Our minds...all healing.





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In clouds we find relief...fondest shapes our own belief...
In clouds we find relief...fondest shapes our own belief...

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manatita44 15 months ago from london

Wonderful Haikus. As I said earlier. You've mastered the art. Joy and Love this weekend.


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whonunuwho 15 months ago from United States Author

Thanks for your kind review my friend, whonu


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Vellur 15 months ago from Dubai

Clouds have come alive in your haiku, great write!


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whonunuwho 15 months ago from United States Author

Thank you Vellur and blessings on this nice morning. whonu


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bravewarrior 15 months ago from Central Florida

I love clouds and the many images they paint within. Remember lying on the grass as a child and searching for images in the clouds? It was one of my favorite things to do and still is.


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lisavanvorst 15 months ago from New Jersey

Beautiful, inspiring, calm and relaxing. Well written.


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whonunuwho 15 months ago from United States Author

Thank you for your nice review my friend and blessings on this fine Summer day. whonu


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MsDora 15 months ago from The Caribbean

Clouds are fascinating! God job both in the lines and the pictures. Thanks you for sharing.


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BlossomSB 15 months ago from Victoria, Australia

A lovely use of multiple haikus.


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whonunuwho 15 months ago from United States Author

Thank you my friend and blessings. whonu


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billybuc 15 months ago from Olympia, WA

How many hours as a kid did I spend looking at clouds on a summer's day? I happen to be fascinated by weather, so clouds are something I totally enjoy....and your haikus definitely tugged at my heart.


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whonunuwho 15 months ago from United States Author

Thanks Bill and many blessings to you and your wonderful family. whonu


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aviannovice 14 months ago from Stillwater, OK

As the song says 'I don't really know clouds, at all.'


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whonunuwho 14 months ago from United States Author

Thanks for stopping by. whonu

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