Cold Heart

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Painful Betrayal

Cold Heart


Your stare chills me to the bone

You have a heart as cold as stone

Your mood is always a black tone

You always move within your hone


Such is your cold, cold heart

You’re not aware that is an essential part

A part that has been your art

Whilst you never


You take satisfaction

Whenever there is a faction

Such is your traction

Which derives from a person’s degradation


A person’s discomfiture

Gives you ultimate pleasure

You’re fond of inflicting seizure

Delights you beyond measure


Oh you’re like a starved snake

You’re comforting as a frozen lake

When will you stop this and make

A heaven here on earth at your own wake…



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Lyrickkw 5 years ago from PHILADELPHIA

You have a nice poem. It is very deep. Nice photographs


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful, You depict a cold heart well....


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Hunbbel Meer 5 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan.

Very beautiful. You deciphered a cold heart with extreme proficiency. Congratulations for using such well-equipped words.


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raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

@Lyrikkw...thank you...anyway google is a rich source of photos...


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raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

@always exploring...thank you...it's been an honor...


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raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

@Hunbbel Meer...thank you...actually i get the inspiration from a friend who was a victim of betrayal...


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Eparisi679 5 years ago from Maryland

I love the last line, and making the connection between heaven on earth and (i'm assuming) this persons place in hell...awesome


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raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

well, i think his life is in hell...but i still wish he will come around and realize that heaven is on earth...thank you...


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raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

well, i think his life is in hell...but i still wish he will come around and realize that heaven is on earth...thank you...


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raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

well, i think his life is in hell...but i still wish he will come around and realize that heaven is on earth...thank you...


Phoebe Angelique Paires 5 years ago

For me, this is the most wonderful poetry I've ever read. I chose this because, it's only a simple but a wonderful sayings


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raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

thanks Phoebe for dropping by...and i'm glad that you like it...


coney dada 5 years ago

I really like the poem which encodes about a person having a "cold heart" or in other term a person having a no sympathy to others. It really reflects my own situation because I really don't give people's important towards myself but rather I'll just ignore it.I just realize that when would I stop this.Is it when I supposed to hurt others or when I used to let other feels that their useless.

The poem was really nice in which can inspire people to realize and make a better changes that can help not only themselves but also other people.


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raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

as i see you Coney you're not the person you think you are...because you take notice of how that kind of attitude affects others...just be yourself...thanks for leaving your comment here...


coney dada 5 years ago

speechless?

hehehhe!


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raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

why are you out of speech...just express yourself freely here...


coney dada 5 years ago

i really don't want to share my self to others.


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raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

not yourself but your feelings and thoughts...would you rather keep a boiling water in your bag or would you rather let it out and let it simmer down?


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CloudExplorer 4 years ago from New York City

Wow, this one is very chilling to me, but I dig the cold & gloominess somehow, it embraces a persons hope that heaven awaits them, just by the very last lines. I'm not sure though if its for someone other than the person feeling such cold emotions though.

Voted up Raciniwa, thanks for sharing with me again too.


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

thank you cloudexplorer, that's why i was thinking could it be that i too have a cold heart? or was it written for an undue emotion?that thought still lingers on my mind if i am capable of such...


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thinice13 4 years ago from Colorado

A great poem, love the visuals it creates.


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

hello thinice...thank you so much for your wonderful comment...


Sueswan 4 years ago

Hi Raciniwa,

"Oh you’re like a starved snake

You’re comforting as a frozen lake"

Perfect words and images of someone with a cold heart.

Voted up and awesome.


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

thank you Sueswan...but yes, at times people don't seem to realize our being human and be like the snake...


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven

This is very beautiful Raciniwa.


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

thank you caroline for dropping by...have a wonderful day...


lovedoctor926 4 years ago

Good imagery to describe a cold heart.


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

thank you lovedoctor for visiting for leaving a wonderful comment...have a great day...


KDuBarry03 4 years ago

Outstanding! This is great, Racinwa :)


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

thank you again Barry...this was based on a true experience...

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