Come Closer…


Tell me your secrets

I will take care of them


Come closer

Than an inch


Coz


I want to tell you

What I couldn’t tell you


When sunshine

Lit your hair

That summer

When Angels were set free


When the cool breeze was

Blowing your hair

kissing my face


When you finally dreamt of me


Source


To the one I am madly in love with… It all started from a dream..and then now you are kissing every part of me…and me wants to be next to you.




By Fehl Dungo © Copyright 2012

Dedicated to Cathy Nerujen (Astra Nomik)

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The original Eman 4 years ago from london

I love this poem. The picture is beautifull and the words flow so well together. What fantastic love to have for one another , great stuff.


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

I always spend much time finding the right picture. Must be beautiful as my babe :p Thank you for liking this.


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Rosemay50 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

A lovely love poem. Love makes us see the beauty in the simplest of things.

I love the image too, sometimes it take far longer to find the right one than it does to write the poem.


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The original Eman 4 years ago from london

Honestly you definately found the right picture its so magical.when looking at it paradise enters your mind. Great stuff


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Lovely blaise, How sweet you have found your love, much happiness to you both. I love the picture too...


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Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

The perfect picture to your wonderful poem of love...

Wishing you both much happiness, Lesley


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Oh Fehl, thank you for this beautiful poem... your words always melt my heart.

There is so much sweetness in your words here, Fehl. You are blazing a trail with this passion and I love it.... that's why you are blaise.... hehehe... :)

I want to come closer than an inch, baby. Mwaaaaaaaaaah mwaaaaaaaaaaaah :P XOXOXOXOXOX

Thank you for this lovely romantic hub and dedicated to me too.... I love you Fehl :)

PS I love the photo too ...


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven

Hi Blaise I love your style everything from your words to the image to the spirit behind the poem. You're a true sensuous romantic. Voted up.


KatrineDalMonte 4 years ago

Beuatiful, and so wonderful to see two so deeply in love..take care :-)


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

The emotions are pure and powerful. The feeling of eternal love in the poem overwhelms me.


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

Well that was a pure joy to read! Lovely...sensual...almost erotic...beautifully written.


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

It's nice to have good dreams about a lover.

Voted up and beautiful, Joyce


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Hi Rosemay :) yes everything about love is beautiful. Haha yeah spent much time finding the perfect photo to suit what I feel and describe my poetry. Thank you for the nice words :)

Hello The Original Eman. What a lovely Profile Name. You mind if I ask why it’s The Original Eman? Thanks for liking the photo too. It’s not mine actually lol but I love it.. I love silhouettes...

Buyaionaacount thanks.

Hello Ruby. :) you are so great and sweet for always reading us :) Thank you.

Thank you Movie Master :)

Hi, baby. I’m so happy you love this. It’s quite simple but it means a lot.. You know it already and yes only you knows who is Blaise.. hehehe :) Oh please come closer than an inch..In your lovely robe I want to be…. :p Mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! I love you, babe.

Glad you love the photo. That’s my Cathy in the sunset at the beach.. :)

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Hello Caroline. Thank you for appreciating and loving the spirit of this poem. :) You are awesome!

Hi Katrine. Thank you for the wonderful words. :)

Hello Vinaya. Oh wow, your recent Haikus are so sexy. I’m happy you read my latest poem. Thank you.

Billybuc thank you for the beautiful comments.

Hi Joyce. Yeah it is. She is my dream come true.. Thanks for the vote :)


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

Very beautiful! Breathy and loving, love the picture too!


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Breathy and loving I like those words :) Thank you so much Max


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Nikkij504gurl 4 years ago from Louisiana

Beautiful poem. short and sweet. like a dream, that we wake up from all too soon. Glad your dream can become reality. :)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Thanks Nikki you are awesome!


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sofs 4 years ago

Beautiful. Dreamy romantic poetry. Have a lovely day!


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Thanks for the beautiful words my day is lovelier :)


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xstatic 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

Wonderful poety and great images,"when sunshine lit your hair that summer, when angels were set free," Beautiful!


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

thank you Xstatic for appreciating my expressions :)


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Angelme566 4 years ago

Oh my this is so beautiful ..i can feel every inch of it . so true and so pure..

a perfect poem plus the photo makes it more tasty..I love this..Voted up !


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Glad you felt every inch of it. That's a very beautiful thing to hear. Happy you found the photo tasty too. Your comments made my day. Thank you Angel. :)


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Voronwe 4 years ago

There's so much beauty in this Love! So honestly and beautifully expressed...it's quite special. Thanks blaise!


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Thanks Voronwe :) Yes this is for a very special person in my life


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

I love this beautiful hub, Fehl..... ^_^


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

I love you more baby :)


KatrineDalMonte 4 years ago

Lovely, every word of your poem sings LOVE. Best wishes to you.


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Cheeky Girl 4 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

Fehl just as always - you blow me to the moon with such wonderful fluid language! I love the way you use your words. This is a true love poem and the feelings pour from the words here! I am true believer that Love sets you free, and this proves it nicely.

Miss Mocha Latte is smiling so much lately! :)

This is so uplifting and I love it Fehl! XOX


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Thanks Katrine :)

Hello my Curly Cassy! Miss Mocha Latte and her Radox inspire me so much and wake the shewolf on me :D Yeah love sets us free and more. Thank you honey Curlz for this and for everything.. Mwaaaaaaaaaaaaah!

She is smiling so much lately? Hmmmm... :)

XOXO


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SanneL 4 years ago from Sweden

So sweet and so very romantic! Your passion and love to that special person in your life, oozes out from each and every word in this beautiful poem.


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Cheeky Girl 4 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

Yes, she just published another poem yesterday. Is it just me or is there much more romantic poetry here on the hubs these days? Rock it babe!

Your poetry is more bolder and I like it, Fehl! :)

XOXOX


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rahul0324 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

Hat's off! To the love which brings out such lovely emotions in you... the poetry so beautiful that you can get lost into it!

Great work Dear..

Luck and respect


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Alastar Packer 4 years ago from North Carolina

This reminds of the Norah Jones song- the one about being with her lover under a tin roof in the rain.- That song that made her a star. Very lovingly nice blaise.


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Hi SanneL. Thank you so much for your wonderful words. Such a great feeling when best poets like you drop by here and read my hub. :)

Hello Cassy. It is just us LOL hehe I’m loving the romantic hubs lately too. I miss your hubs honey. I miss Megumi and your sexy wits :) XOXOXO

Rahul hello there. Thank you for the beautiful words. You are great yourself. Oh did you get lost? :D

Hi Alastar. I heard one of her songs before, can’t remember. Her voice is powerful. Now I wanna know that song that made her a star. Sounds so romantic. You must tell me. Did you forget it too? :)


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nighthag 4 years ago from Australia

simply beautiful,

you are very blessed to be able to have such passion in your life thank you for sharing such a sweet snipit of it with us


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QudsiaP1 4 years ago

Beautiful and very romantic.


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Yeah I am so blessed and I wanna make each moment count.. Thanks Nighthag :)

Happy to know you liked it Qudsia :) thanks


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Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

You have such an amazing way with beautiful wors.

It must come frm the reality of your beautiful feelings.

Wonderful,blaise.

Take care


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Hello Dim! Yah it all comes from this amazing feelings.. Thank you so much. Have a sweet weekend xo


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girishpuri 4 years ago from NCR , INDIA

My imagination goes wild....lol


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

write a poem and paint your imagination while it's wild.. lol

Thank you for stopping by :)


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epigramman 4 years ago

....so nice to see my Sannel here - she certainly knows a good thing when she sees it - and yes - I just have to say My My My My My - I must get Augustine over here - because this is the kind of genius he writes - must go now and jump into the lake to cool off after reading this one - lake erie time 12:19am


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

You and Sannel are a magnet of hotness :) Thank you so much. Oh I'll be happy to see Augustine here.


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

I just pinned this hub, honey. :) Added to my growing collection of your beautiful words. Mwaaaaaaaaaah XOXOX


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

can I pin you? hehehe MWaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah :)

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