Come! Come! My Sweet Love, Come! A Sweet but INNOCENT Love Poem For SURABHI

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The fire of love

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Love flames

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Floating gracefully on the river Yamuna,

I basked in the joy of two elegant swans,

Bonding together like conjoined twins.

Drifting romantically on a carpet of celestial auras,

I await the awakening of the dawn;

Long for the coming of my Sunrise.

Come! Sweet longing! Take wings!

Let the flames of thy inner cauldron,

Caress her soft and dew-filled lips.

Spouting like a fountain from this forlorn heart,

May the core of my breath enfold her,

Like wings of precious kisses,

Floating on the hyacinths of her soft; delicate lips.


Burning an enchanted furnace in my emotions,

She sends me crazy with delight!

How I wish to serve her with an undying vigour,

Moulded from our own intimate tears!

Now timeless ... timeless … timeless, is the moment,

As the humming birds; the firmament of starlit grandeur,

Invite me to sing her a melody,

And I bask in their cadences of cosmic Light, singing:


Hummingbird

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Chorus

“Come, come, my sweet love come,

Be my darling ruba tum tum!”

Romeo and Juliet

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An Effulgence of Light

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Poem continues

O my Juliette, I am your Romeo, and you?

The peerless fire of my Soul.

Butterflies dance in symmetry as I gaze,

Listening to the call of the Aspen,

Whispering a most wonderful song called LOVE.

The translucent hues from my myriad-tinted windows,

Streams through like a row of radiant candles,

Augmenting an unspoken bliss that leaves me speechless!


O my Trojan Helen; O my Princess Nefertiti!

May our life-giving energies, continue to grow and blossom,

In the fragrant garden of the Eternal.


-Manatita, The Lantern Carrier. ©Copyrighted, 20th July, 2016.

~ Awakening The Inner Light ~

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Jodah 4 months ago from Queensland Australia

Manatita, I will read anything dedicated to our dear friend Surabhi. Your poetry is full of beauty. Just like the subject. Stunning photos too.


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manatita44 4 months ago from london Author

Thank you, thank you, my Friend ... So glad that you like her ... my sweet student.. my sisterji... my Friend.


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Frank Atanacio 4 months ago from Shelton

very inspiring and wonderfully written my friend bravo..:)


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MarleneB 4 months ago from Northern California, USA

This is very beautiful. I like how you cleverly interrupted the cadence with, "O my Trojan Helen; O my Princess Nefertiti!"


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cam8510 4 months ago from Columbus, Georgia until the end of November 2016.

"You send me crazy with delight!" Who doesn't want to feel that? This tells the longing every one of us feels or wants to feel. You express in beautiful words the desire of every man and every woman's heart.


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manatita44 4 months ago from london Author

Frank,

Thank you so much, my Dear Friend. So sweet of you!

Marlene B,

Ha ha...tricks of the trade. Did you like my little chorus? Gratitude ...much.

Cam, you're in love, Bro...did you say your loved one passed? trying to remember, sorry. Much Love.


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MarleneB 4 months ago from Northern California, USA

Manatita, I do, I do, I do like the chorus very much.


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Surabhi Kaura 4 months ago from Toronto, Canada

Whoa! I sign in… and O' boy! That’s the first thing I see in the news feed. I thank you so much, Acharaya. Loved this poem of yours. You're so loving. What can I say? God bless your noble Heart. I will read again once my class is over. Om Shanti.


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manatita44 4 months ago from london Author

Thanks Again, Marlene. The poem is changing fast! I reckon I put it up to quickly.

Surabhi, Please do. The poem has changed again. Enjoy your class. Dhiraja, my friend, will do the cover of Maxims For Our Children: A Look At The Teachings of Jesus, The Christ. Love you!


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Surabhi Kaura 4 months ago from Toronto, Canada

Awesome! Let's wait then. Cool. Love ya too!


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MarleneB 4 months ago from Northern California, USA

I read it again and I still like it a lot!


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manatita44 4 months ago from london Author

He he. It should only get better, eh? Marlene you're a star. Love to your family and friends.


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MarleneB 4 months ago from Northern California, USA

Thank you Manatita. You are so dear. Much love always to you. Extend love to your loved ones, as well.


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cam8510 4 months ago from Columbus, Georgia until the end of November 2016.

manatita, yes, she passed away in 2008 after 24 wonderful years.


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manatita44 4 months ago from london Author

My deepest empathies, my Brother. You remind me of Bill and Eric, in the nicest possible way. Of course I wish their Mrs much good health and a great life, God's willing. Much Love.


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shprd74 4 months ago from Bangalore

Beautiful like love. Excellent. Great dedication to dear sister surabhi. Lol bro.

- hari


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manatita44 4 months ago from london Author

Thank you, Bro. Like Love, yes. Appreciated. Om Shanti!


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Venkatachari M 4 months ago from Hyderabad, India

Beautiful lines with a great message of Love. A nice dedication to Surabhi.


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manatita44 4 months ago from london Author

I appreciate you, Brother Venkatachari M. Gratitude ...


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aviannovice 3 months ago from Stillwater, OK

That is an apt picture of the Black Swan, as well as the white one, as well. Beauty reins in a trio!


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manatita44 3 months ago from london Author

Thanks Deb,

I know you're the Master or perhaps the Professora here. I found another two that conveyed the idea of 'conjoined' as well. But this picture won hands down.


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Ashish Dadgaa 3 months ago from India

Dear Manatita,

I don't what to say about this dedication. You are such a magician of a poem. You give heart and breathing to each and every word. You each line creates a picture in front of readers eyes and your words make us think for hour and hour.

What shall I say about this Queen? We are short of words to describe this beautiful and indeed innocent lady, Surabhi.

She is having a big heart with a sharp brain.

Indeed, A Sweet but INNOCENT Love Poem for charming Queen, Surabhi.

Lot of love to you manatita

Regards,

Ashish

Regards,

Ashish


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manatita44 3 months ago from london Author

Thank you ... thank you ... she is very dear to me. Much Love.

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