Come With Me (poem)

A memory

Returns to me

Again to see

What used to be

Come lay with me

Come stay with me

-

Into this light

My soul took flight

A past delight

Did there ignite

Come lay with me

Come stray with me

-

A heartfelt hue

That once we knew

Returns to view

Our Joyous dew

Come lay with me

Come sway with me

-

And soon came moon

To add its tune

As lips commune

Made lovers swoon

Come lay with me

Come pray with me

-

For don’t you see

My memory

You came to be

A dream set free

You laid with me

You stayed with me

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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

This flows beautifully!


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Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

Lovely, and I loved the "come pray with me" part the best. God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

MHatter you write the most beautiful poems that flow like magic.. If I could only write a little bit like you I would be so happy..

hugs from tennessee

Debbie


Sunnie Day 4 years ago

Beautiful...so deep and profound..


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Curiad 4 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

Wow, this is so very sensual and spiritual.


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dghbrh 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

Wow...romantic delight with a pinch of little twist at the end....you really know how to ignite the crave of emotion in heart. Well job done. I pressed many buttons here and passing it on for sure.


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newusedcarssacram 4 years ago from Sacramento, CA, U.S.A

beautiful poem...


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rcrumple 4 years ago from Kentucky

Mh -

I like the styling. Also, very visual and serene. You really are a romantic at heart, aren't you? Great poem, my friend!


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

I like the surprise ending, the poem flowed so beautifully, rather like drifting down a quiet stream and coming to an abrupt end. Soft sensuous magic.


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midget38 4 years ago from Singapore

A really romantic piece, and I like how the repetition brought this about. Great, MHatter.


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ignugent17 4 years ago

Beautiful and I agree with Michelle it is very romantic. Voted up and more.


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Patty Kenyon 4 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

Very Beautiful and Romantic!!! Awesome Job!!! Voted Up, Awesome, and Beautiful!!!


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Darrylmdavis 4 years ago from Brussels, Belgium

A relaxing piece. Thanks for sharing. :-)


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pearlmacb 4 years ago from Switzerland

Beautiful words, I also like your choice of title for this one :)

VotedUp


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teaches12345 4 years ago

Very nice. The tropical setting makes it even more inviting.


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Very beautiful..She stayed with you, the best part..Awesome..


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. Great poem. Passing it on.


Janhorner 4 years ago

Absolutely sensual to say the least, wonderful words of love.

Jan


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Mama Kim 8 4 years ago

Beautiful beautiful poem! The rhythm is absolutely amazing ^_^ Love it! voted and shared!


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

I love the rhythm in this poem. The words, as always are romantic and sensual. Voted up.

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