Coming Together With New Enthusiasm

High On Life

As the hours pass and another day is at an end

We look back and see where we have been

Enriching our soul and taking knowledge to a new level

Bonding with friends who encourage us to move

In a direction that will bring us to our rightful place

Our greatest competition is pushing ourself

Always striving to succeed

Loving a happiness with no greed

When we have the option to do anything

We dedicate our time and energy now

Well worth a rewarding future outcome

Watching so many other people live carefree and haphazardly

Only to wonder where their dreams will go

When they no longer give effort to watch them grow


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Kathryn Stratford 3 years ago from Manchester, Connecticut

It's good to enjoy every day, and to work hard to be successful, and think of the future. This is a very pleasant poem.


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DREAM ON 3 years ago Author

Kathryn Stratford Thanx so much for your wonderful comments.Wishing you the best. In life we have to have patience and love.We can all try to make life better and help others to do the same in the process.Now that is the life to die for.


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kidscrafts 3 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

Nice poem Dream-On! I will take some time to enjoy the view today and looking forward to the future with optimism :-)

Have a great weekend!


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DREAM ON 3 years ago Author

kidscrafts Planning a future may be less exciting than going to a party or the movies.In the end all your efforts will pay off.Thanx so much for reading.The weather hit ninety five today the hottest so far.Stay cool and enjoy.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Wonderful DREAM ON and enjoyed this gem.

Have a great weekend.

Eddy.


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DREAM ON 3 years ago Author

Eiddwen So happy to share with friends that care.You made my weekend more special than you know.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. Never give up on dreams.


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Michael-Milec 3 years ago

Hi dream-on.

Instigative. Success of being fully satisfied at day's end; knowing that someone around in need has been touched by the glimpse of eternal value to where we all have to go. My work, my words , my encouragement onward the narrow gate, to enter the everlasting joy... Tomorrow someone else will like to be encouraged in right direction ... as long as my days continue ...

Keep up with good work.

Voted interesting.


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DREAM ON 3 years ago Author

Gypsy Rose Lee Dreams make our world a beautiful place.Michael-Milec You uncover the curiosity that I lead to.Expanding in so many directions digging even deeper.Thanx to you both for your wonderful comments.


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Enthusiasm pushes you forward in life to make your thoughts and ideas come alive


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DREAM ON 3 years ago Author

DDE Other peoples enthusiasm is contagious and wild.It gives me energy when I am low.It makes me want to do more when I am lazy.Luckily I can transform that energy back inside of me.A kind of recycling that doesn't need a bin.Where we all benifit from within.

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