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She asked for my input
a stiff comment on her
that would encompass
just how I felt about
what she so enjoyed doing
which was simply
making poetry flesh
and so I gave her a column
seven inches in heighth
quite thick with firm content
smoothly inserted
and topped off with a
well rounded point
I laid it all out for her
and though
it was a bit blunt
she truly enjoyed
it's direction
was full-filled by it
and rode out the most
critical points
with a rather large
smile on her face
she sighed at times
as I got her to open up
much more then ever before
and saw that
she gratefully recieved
all that I offered
and begged for more
I obliged
and we both
found the content
quite contentful
when I was done
stroking her ego
I withdrew and let
her bask in the glow
which just goes to prove
that famous quote:
"A Pen-is.... more powerful then a sword!!!" ©-MFB III

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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

Oh my gosh! Yep that's my comment. Just, "Oh my gosh."


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Ralph Deeds 7 years ago

At least one lady got the point, so to speak.

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