Commitments poem

Commitment

Commitment


He said he had commitments

You wait and watch the seasons pass

His hand so warm at times

Now you feel only a cold grasp

Stay here by my chair, my pet

Wait for what, she asked with regret

He stroked her hair one idle day

She looked up knowing what he would say

I am busy, have commitments but stay

She whispered against his knee

I have done that since last May

Dear Sir it is time for me to leave

He shrugged his shoulders when she walked to the door

For you see there were so many more

(c) B. A. Williams

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Comments 7 comments

Ghaelach 4 years ago

Hi B.A.

I'm not really a lover of poems although I have tried to write a couple.

I found this an absolute hit. Beautifully written and I think the young woman did the right thing.

LOL Ghaelach


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B. A. Williams 4 years ago from USA Author

Ghaelach,

Thanks for reading this poem, I appreciate you enjoying it even more so since you are not a lover of poetry.

You're right she did do the right thing and someday I may write a story about it. Thanks agan!


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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco

I was 30ish when I discovered mine


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B. A. Williams 4 years ago from USA Author

Mhatter,

Thanks for reading. Sometimes a poem motivates me to write a story.


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Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

BA.. Yeah I enjoyed this :)


lovedoctor926 3 years ago

Smart woman. voted up awesome:)


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B. A. Williams 3 years ago from USA Author

Thanks Frank glad you enjoyed it and lovedoctor thank you for voting it up. Glad you both enjoyed it.

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