Cotton Caught Covered Dream

Hand to me that shiny glass hand Grenade

And I say do not let go of this dull pin.

Take this letter opener and sit with me awhile

And admire those greenest cloud’s floating by.

Walk with I threw these bluest fields and scream

Out loud your animosity covered cry’s and listen

To that brown turning black soil die!

These flowers fly low!

And these birds bloom high!

Didn’t you know?

There Is no piece to tape back into this broken

Down so called ruined lettering.

The ancient letter in our bottle Is no more washing up

On our peaceful and prettiest shore!

Is It the blue tide we all so adore

No more ?

 

Comments 15 comments

Sapphire Fisher 6 years ago

Very nice


getmyback 6 years ago

David , this somehow spoke directly to me or like I said it.

My favorite now for sure so far.

Music must be put to this

Blues

Bravo David

You have much talent yet remain so humble, your one of the rare ones my friend.

We need to start emailing soon, :)))))))))))))


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Im So Glad

It Touched You.

And Thank You So Much

Its So Nice To Hear

Constructive Criticism.

And I agree.

David Wayne


kimberlyslyrics 6 years ago

David why is there something that brings more thana curiosity

of things we could see, but are afraid to reach it

This touched me too

All because of you

Don't ever be through

We'll go to the zoo?

ha

loved it

Kimberly


kimberlyslyrics 6 years ago

just back, needed to rate it up again :)


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Thank You So Much!

So Thoughful Of You.

Im So Glad Ive Put

Myself Out There For

The World!

Ill Be Writing After

My Beautiful Death Kimberly !


Nameless 6 years ago

This is a

really cool hub!


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aware 6 years ago from West Palm Beach Florida.

cool hub . im a poetry guy . nice to see im not alone. good job bro .


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Michael Shane 6 years ago from Gadsden, Alabama

Great job!


kimberlyslyrics 6 years ago

so, tell,

what's in the bottle?

:o)


kimberlyslyrics 6 years ago

forgot to mention, this verse is all that and then some,

And admire those greenest cloud’s floating by.

Walk with I threw these bluest fields and scream

Out loud your animosity covered cry’s and listen

To that brown turning black soil die!


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

A Vivid Dream Dear..


poetlorraine 6 years ago

this is good..... i likes it....


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Sunshiney31 6 years ago

I floated through this one ,very good thanks so much for sharing your talent :)


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

@SunShine31---> Thank You Very Much

Very Nice To Hear

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