Could It Be Love


There is no telling when and where

Who and how so gentle with debonair

A chance will you give to one unknown

Maturing into something fully grown


Placing your heart within his hands

Following each and every love command

Hoping the choices that will be made

Will never vaporize into air and away to fade


Thoughts exchanged without words spoken

Holding each memory made as a life token

Nothing is left for one to gather

Causing me to bathe in his love lather


Is there really something that exist of this sort

Allowing his steps to lead the way and escort

His eyes examining a true love so kind

Leaving his voice to rest in my mind



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bbnix 5 years ago from Southern California

I don't know about the "he" part, for the only guy I know is me, and any one with sense should run from me post hence, but I do know about the heart part, so from this humble, loved struck ghoul, true love is life's best goal, my friend, and you, the most deserving soul...

I want you to know, my dearest friend, your poems always make my day...=P

Voted up and all the adjectives...

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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

BB, Of course you are the one who will hold a sacred place in my heart even with a man I may learn to love but with my deepest feelings I feel absolutely the same way with out a doubt of course ;)

smiles extended to robin


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Mentalist acer 5 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

...As your creative voice impresses my mind Bella.;)

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4elements 5 years ago

I loved this Bella, it was great how you wrote it.

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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Acer,Thank you as your words of appreciation peak my inspiration!

4, Thank you very much I appreciate your feedback as always.... :)

smiles :)


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

Wow this is awesome. I hope you have found love again, I know for sure that you will Bella. Beautiful.

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simone93 5 years ago

This is so amazing...if I could only arrange my words so perfectly....

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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Ace, Thank you for your sweet comment I have found love again thnks to all your tips and thought process *_*

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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

simone, I thougt the same when reading others words but then I started to try and this is what happens when you try. Please try and I will be the first to comment! Thanks for reading

smiles :)


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Pamela99 5 years ago from United States

This is beautiful. I wish love like that to come into your life.

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Johnny Love 5 years ago

Found in a light forever in your heart. A love so amazing you smile in a way you never thought you would. Love the way you express yourself, even if only one person understands. This is beautifully said.

tnderhrt23 5 years ago

And the "Mojo" returns, and the Muse speak...Nice job, once again, bella! Congrats on finding Love again! Hugs!

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Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

Great words bella and I loved it all.I push all the buttons here.

Take care


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Pamela, Love has came into my sight and the man that carries it is wonderful thank you!!

Johnny, I never thought I would be able to mend my broken shattered heart but I guess anything is possible.Thank you...

Tnder, Yes it has after 5 days :(. thank you for the encouragement!!

Eid, Thank you I clicked the like button on the one you posted this morning on FB!! Thank you....

smiles :)


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Bumpsysmum 5 years ago from Cambridgeshire

I hope you have found your love bellawritter23, you are deserving of it my dear friend, all good hearts have a matching pair I'm sure and when they beat together they play heavens' rhythm :-)

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b. Malin 5 years ago

Leaving his voice to rest in my mind...What a beautiful line Bella, Loved this poem!

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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

Very nice ! I esp. liked the last line. Thank you.


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Fossillady 5 years ago from Saugatuck Michigan

Me too Bella, the last line got to me most and left a lasting impression!

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ladyjojo 5 years ago

Nice hub bella


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