Couldn’t See (tanka)

She just couldn’t see

The reason for their grumbling

Hatred and distrust

Which someone brought on himself

For she had loved him too much

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bravewarrior 20 months ago from Central Florida

Is there such a thing as loving too much? I suppose there is if it becomes smothering and obsessive. This tanka really made me think, Martin.

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