Creating The Gem

They're facets you see

Or maybe you don't

And that the problem

They all connect

In symmetry and form

You say I speak in circles

So would you were your thoughts true

For truth makes a circle

It validates itself

And in such looping grants grounding

Life's full of little circles

Some not so pleasant

Or so kind

But true to their realm

Their place of origin

The human mind

For if in your mind

You form a truth

All facets of that truth must agree

No conundrums are left unsolved

No loose ends to tie, you see

Nature would have to agree

To make it gel

This is not to say

All circles are wholesome

A man wrapped around the axel

Is still insane

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hillrider 5 years ago from Mid-west United States

Jfrost...been awhile since I visited. It's nice to return to relevancy in poetry...well done.

Say hello whan you find time...


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Jaggedfrost 5 years ago Author

It is nice to see you well and reading as well. I will have to visit. See if you are causing trouble as well.


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hillrider 5 years ago from Mid-west United States

Look for 'Clinking Mettle' ...at AT


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

I just love your words - awesome!


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Jaggedfrost 5 years ago Author

Why thank you my dear.


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QudsiaP1 5 years ago

Wow, this was amazing; the way you have directly explained the veiling of the words, this is perfect.


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saddlerider1 5 years ago

Simply beautiful train of thought and loved your twisted ending. "A man wrapped around the axe Is still insane"

Bravo, well done.


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Jaggedfrost 5 years ago Author

Why thank you my dears, you make me blush but gratified all the same.


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Nsirius 5 years ago from Fukuoka, Japan

Well crafted!

(I am new on this site and just began to read a little.)


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Jaggedfrost 5 years ago Author

Thank you, welcome to hubpages, I am glad to meet you.

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