Crime Scene

Crime Scene

The crime scene was mainly the car,

with the victim slumped in the backseat,

emotions did not go far,

the body looked like unpackaged meat,

her skirt and bra hiked up to display

a chest and stomach marked by a dozen

or more vertical stab wounds,

the police could feel the heat,

and on the floor of the backseat,

the killer had dumped the contents

of the victim’s purse,

indicating an apparent robbery,

her ghost would curse,

beyond that, there was no physical evidence

in the car,

no fingerprints, no fibers, no hairs,

just exploding emotions, and fears,

no witnesses and no tears.

© 2011 Frank Atanacio

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LaThing 3 years ago from From a World Within, USA

Oh, my! Another vivid picture of a crime scene..... That really grabs your emotions! Wonderful work, Frank! Voting up and everything.... Take care, buddy!


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Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton Author

thanks Lathing for voting up and everything LOL


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Marlin 55 3 years ago from USA

Another great poem Frank full of imagery that makes me cringe.


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Fullerman5000 3 years ago from Louisiana, USA

Great job. This is like a poem for the show the First 48 which I am addicted to. Great work. Simple, yet so impactful. Awesome job.


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Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton Author

Marlin thanks so much and you too Fullerman5000


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justateacher 3 years ago from Somewhere Over The Rainbow - Near Oz...

Great imagery as always, Frank - I love how you write in pictures...


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Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton Author

thank you justateacher :)

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