Crow Haiku

Yesterday I saw some crows on my fence; just sitting there in the rain. So wet that raindrops dripped from their feathers. They stayed put, not budging from the fence, only occasionally shaking off the rain from their wings.

Crow Haiku

The crows on my fence

Rain saturated blackness

Shake their tuxedos

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Jools99 3 years ago from North-East UK Author

Jen, Hi! And many thanks for your comment - they are always in my garden, often fighting with the magpies...now that's another hub in waiting!


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Jen Card 3 years ago

The crows on my fence

Rain saturated blackness

Shake their tuxedos

I LOVE THIS! Excellent write up of those black birds I favor. Thank you for sharing this awesome haiku. Voted up!


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Jools99 4 years ago from North-East UK Author

unknown spy - many thanks for reading and commenting.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

Very creative! unique and lovely haiku about the crows.


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Jools99 4 years ago from North-East UK Author

PDPoole - Hi :o) Many thanks for your kind comment.


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PDPoole 4 years ago from Alexandria, Louisiana

Fantastic! Perfect capture of emotion..I could feel the gray and smell the rain! How marvelous! With hands palm to palm I bow and thank your for this wonderful view!


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That Grrl 4 years ago from Barrie, Ontario, Canada

I liked your description before the haiku just as much as the poem itself.


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Jools99 4 years ago from North-East UK Author

fpherj48 - I find myself inspired by all kinds of things - the crows were just sitting on my fence getting drenched and I decided to write a poem about them - I find haiku quite difficult, I'm too wordy :o)


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

I was recently introduced to haikus. They're fun. This one is great. It's amazing what inspires us, isn't it? UP++


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Jools99 4 years ago from North-East UK Author

Unknown Spy - great name :o), thanks for your comment, I appreciate it.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

Great haiku!


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Jools99 4 years ago from North-East UK Author

Annie, thanks for passing this on - I hope your daughter likes it. They do like they wear tuxedos sometimes.


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Fennelseed 4 years ago from Australia

I will be sharing this with my daughter who loves crows and claims "they are misunderstood". Lovely hauki!! I can visualise those crows in formal gear. My votes and sharing!


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Jools99 4 years ago from North-East UK Author

Audrey, thanks so much for your kind comment :)


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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

Loved this!


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Jools99 4 years ago from North-East UK Author

Rolly, yes, I can understand why they might dislike days like these it's a bit like that today here in my neck of the woods - rain, rain and more rain! Thanks so much for your comment.


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Rolly A Chabot 4 years ago from Alberta Canada

Love it and sadly they dislike these kinds of days...

Hugs from Canada


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Jools99 4 years ago from North-East UK Author

John, thanks for your comment!


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jonmcclusk 4 years ago from Cinnaminson, New Jersey

Nice haiku, very mysterious.


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Jools99 4 years ago from North-East UK Author

Vinaya, thanks as always for your kind comment.


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

wow, this is lovely!


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Jools99 4 years ago from North-East UK Author

Hyphenbird, thanks for commenting. I'm now thinking that these crows were like the Rat Pack - 'The Crow Pack' Mmm...not as cool but you have caught my imagination now :)


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Hyphenbird 4 years ago from America-Broken But Still Beautiful

I really do like this Jools. Shake their tuxedos. Perfect lines...makes me think of Frank Sinatra for some reason. lol


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Jools99 4 years ago from North-East UK Author

Movie Master and Moonlake - Many thanks for your kind comments!


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moonlake 4 years ago from America

Very good. I love crows and ravens, we have them all over here and I'm always watching them. Voted Up.


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Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

Hi Jools, fantastic Haiku, love it and voted up!


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Jools99 4 years ago from North-East UK Author

Eddy, thanks for stopping by; thanks for your comment!


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

Very creative indeed.

Thanks for sharing.

Take care,

Eddy.


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phdast7 4 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

You are good at Haiku; I never was when I was in school. Maybe I will try it again some time. I could picture the crows, the fence, the rain. Nice work.


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Jools99 4 years ago from North-East UK Author

Thanks Flora..I still have a long way to go but you're right...it's addictive!


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FloraBreenRobison 4 years ago

Second haiku in a row. What fun. Yes, this isan apt description of crows.


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Jools99 4 years ago from North-East UK Author

Cheers PoshCoffeeCo, I get lots of birds in my garden but the crows are the most interesting - last week one of them was fighting a magpie on my lawn!


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poshcoffeeco 4 years ago from Cambridgeshire

I have often seen this, but would never have thought to put it into words.Cool.


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Jools99 4 years ago from North-East UK Author

Thanks for your kind comments Nell.


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Jools99 4 years ago from North-East UK Author

Thanks for your kind comments Nell.


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Jools99 4 years ago from North-East UK Author

Thanks for your kind comments Nell.


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Jools99 4 years ago from North-East UK Author

Snakeslane, thanks for commenting, my brain is in 5-7-5 overload at the moment...


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Jools99 4 years ago from North-East UK Author

Russ, thanks for your kind comments.


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Jools99 4 years ago from North-East UK Author

Just Ask Susan, thanks for your comments-I'm still learning Haiku but I love (and also fear) its compactness (not sure if that's an actual word?. Flora said haiku would become addictive!


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Nell Rose 4 years ago from England

Hi, really liked this, and it described them exactly!


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snakeslane 4 years ago from Canada

Really enjoyed your crow Haiku Jools, beautiful image, love the photo too. Regards, sankeslane


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Russ Baleson 4 years ago from Sandhurst, United Kingdom

Nice one Jools, great imagery and wonderfully crafted lines. Thanks. Russ


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Just Ask Susan 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada

Awesome Haiku. Can see the picture without the picture.


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cre8ivOne 4 years ago from Midwest, USA

Very cool observation!


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

Jools.. very creative Haiku.. almost like a picture

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