Crying Flower (Emotional Poem)

Crying Flower
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Another poem from my teenage years this one was something at the time that held a lot of meaning for me. I spent a lot of time during those years dealing with teenage angst, feeling things to the limit and my emotions were very tied in knots at the time. In those days I wouldn't have even dreamed of being so open and sharing this poem with anyone but these days I am fine with it. So much has happened and life has moved far beyond what it was in this freeze frame of time. This one runs more like a song than a true poem but you be the judge and let me know what you think of it.


Flutter petals in the sky

Crying flowers, tear to eye

When I see away you wilt

Shimmering now white is spilt

Greying slowly float away

Why'd you tell me, here today

Wounded angel your not mine

Save yourself leave me behind


Remember....


Space the cold and lifeless void

Here on earth we can't avoid

Imperfect solutions, imperfect me

Need some time just let me be


Thinking, blooming in your youth

Bury the lies and tell the truth

Never forget who carried you

Never lose the sight of you

Swallowing the time you burn

Frozen lights dark ghosts turn

Heaven's sun upon your face

Tell me why you've left this place


Remember.......


Space the cold and lifeless void

Here on earth we can't avoid

Imperfect solutions, imperfect me

Need some time just let me be


The flesh, the flame away you wash

Pure of softness, knowing the rush

When you see the age gets old

Just remember who you've sold


Just remember...


Space the cold and lifeless void

Here on earth we can't avoid

Imperfect solutions, imperfect me

Need some time just let me be

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Ano 4 years ago

Beautiful


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algarveview 4 years ago from Algarve, Portugal

Loved it. You are right, it is a lot like a song, but that is good thing and I can just remember that feeling. Difficult years, now left behind, but it's nice remembering.


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terrektwo 4 years ago from North America Author

Ano - thank you so much. That's another poem from my teens, another from the vault that I never would have shared back then but glad you enjoyed it :)


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terrektwo 4 years ago from North America Author

algarveview - yes plays like a song, glad you find some memories in it :) Thanks for the comment!


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

great poem. voted up and amazing.


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

awww, sad but inevitable...life is like that...


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breakfastpop 4 years ago

Beautiful and extremely moving poetry. Voted up, beautiful and awesome.


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cherylone 4 years ago from Connecticut

Beautiful poem, if I could do that well, I would consider myself a real poet. Thanks for sharing. :)


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terrektwo 4 years ago from North America Author

writer20 - you make me blush, not sure if it is really an amazing poem but you are amazing for saying so :)


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terrektwo 4 years ago from North America Author

raciniwa - true, the emotions came and they went though like a river in those days, glad to share it :)


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suzzycue 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada

this is beautiful and I can tell it was wrote from your heart -and how you felt way back then-nice


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terrektwo 4 years ago from North America Author

Alecia Murphy - thanks for the nice vote up, the beautiful and awesome I liked this poem too :)


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terrektwo 4 years ago from North America Author

cherylone - I love to her that :) A real poet if only, but I must remain humble, there are better works than mine I'm sure but thank you though.


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terrektwo 4 years ago from North America Author

suzzycue - I did write from my heart and thank you for seeing that. Thanks for commenting as well :)


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Great poem! Love the flow. Can tell it's packed with emotion.


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terrektwo 4 years ago from North America Author

Gypsy Rose Lee - emaotions ran very high at the time for sure. Thanks for commenting :)


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Senoritaa 4 years ago

Your teenage poems make me wish I had saved mine. But they are all gone. Anyway, nice work again.


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terrektwo 4 years ago from North America Author

Senoritaa - for me the art we create of the period is a freeze frame of what we were and how things were at the time. It helps us grow to look back and then move forward :)


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

I think you did a great job on this.. You did this in your youth? I can feel the searching you had..great job

debbie


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terrektwo 4 years ago from North America Author

Deborah Brooks - it was certainly a time when I was trying to figure out life and was doing a lot of writing. thanks for reading :)

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