Crystal Stream (poem)

Let’s share our secret with this crystal stream

To share with flowers how I love you so

And they’ll scent the breeze so it too will know

Which takes to the clouds just how lovers dream


Then all of our Joy clouds write across sky

Which stars in our heaven twinkle to see

Their whispers the moon glows to set free

As worlds on fire now echoes in reply


Soon flames of sheer passion spread far and wide

As fields of surrender are kissed by its flow

And we are engulfed by all that we know

Once sitting by stream now lost in this tide


But maybe someday we’ll wake from this dream

Let’s share our secret with this crystal stream

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eHealer 4 years ago from Las Vegas

Beautiful MHatt! just loved it! Voted up and shared!

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Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

Whew!!! Sizzling Mh!!! Lovely. Voted up. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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midget38 4 years ago from Singapore

So In Love is the song I thought of after I read this. A great read, Hatter, as usual.

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SommerDalton 4 years ago

Another great hub ! Voted up and more!

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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Such tranquility to share, too, with the lovely picture that you have painted.

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rcrumple 4 years ago from Kentucky

Mh -

A great poem of lover's bliss. Well done, my friend!

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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

How beautiful your crystal stream. Lovely..

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Olde Cashmere 4 years ago from Michigan, United States

Beautiful flow Mhatter, really enjoy your style of writing. Another knockout. Voted up, and rating beautiful and awesome.

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Janhorner 4 years ago

Will not say anything other than tender and beautiful. Voted up.


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

Only one word needed here:- Beautiful!!!!

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teaches12345 4 years ago

I love the reference to crystal steams - so refreshing and purity of love. Lovely and passionate.

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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

"Let’s share our secret with this crystal stream," what a great line. I love the imagery.

Voted up.

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jhamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

How have I not read these. Amazing. jamie

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