Star Lovers


We are born stars

You and me

We chose this time

For us to be free

Together we will be

Set in stone

For all eternity

As the white light

Shines down upon us

A renewal takes place

We become one

In sacred matrimony

Our blood flows

Red wine through vines

Our hearts beat as one

In divine love

We transcribe

All space and time

We were born to the stars

So we will shine

You will forever be mine

Embraced in harmony

And the stars will shoot

Into the heavens

So we can play

In musical melodies

This will be our song

One so beautiful

That no one could touch

Notes that explode

Into the universe

In sweet stardust

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Perspycacious 4 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

You are an incorrigible romantic. May life continue to be beautiful without its previous pitfalls and sadnesses.

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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

Caroline , you are a poet after my own heart in fact you already have it. Beautiful poem.

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pagesvoice 4 years ago from New York/Pennsylvania border

You have written a beautifully expressive poem of love and commitment. Those of us who have found what you wrote about are truly the lucky ones in life.

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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

Welcome back from the mini. This a beautiful description of your inner self , if you can only have things your way , I know your wish . So much your poems say and I want to believe I understand then and this one speaks so much.

Great work Caroline , good to see what comes out when you are locked in a beautiful thought.


KatrineDalMonte 4 years ago

Caroline, this is so beautiful, romantic, 2 bright stars next to each other always shining in the sky, 2 souls flowing into 1 eternal creation.

Voted up and awesome :-)

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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Creativity at work. One word AWESOME!!!

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ytsenoh 4 years ago from Louisiana, Idaho, Kauai, Nebraska, South Dakota, Missouri

This piece flowed so nicely. You made good use of descriptive romantic language and any of us who have heightened emotions could embrace. Thumbs up. Thank you. Keep writing.

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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful description of two lovers floating together through eternity via the universe..Loved it!!!

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cherylone 4 years ago from Connecticut

Such a beautiful poem and the pictures are grand! Keep them coming, Caroline.

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SubRon7 4 years ago from eastern North Dakota

Beautiful work, Caroline, as usual. I always like your choice of pics too.

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The Frog Prince 4 years ago from Arlington, TX


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Sueswan 4 years ago

Hi Caroline

This is a masterpiece of true love. Absolutely beautiful.

Voted up and away!

Take care

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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

How beautiful and tender;I loved it caroline and it has to be awarded with an 'up up and away!!'

Take care and have a great day.


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon

beautiful work, caroline. astounding!

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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

@ Perspy thank you for reading and the warm wishes.

@ Michael thank you for all your support as always.

@ Pagesvoice thank you for your great compliment!

@ Sky thank you for your kind words always.

@ Katrine thank you very much dear lady.

@ Gypsy thank you!

@ Ytsenoh thank you for stopping by and reading my poem. I am happy you liked it. Love Audrey Hepburn very classy lady.

@ Always thank you very much. Always good to see u!

@ Cheryl thank you!

@ SubRon thank you for all your support!

@ FrogPrince LOL. Thank you.

@ Sueswan thank you for your great compliment!

@ Eiddwen thank you for the up and away. lol

@ PDX thank you for your support!

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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

so the eternity...the bliss love has to offer...this flows effortlessly from you caroline...

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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you Raciniwa.

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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

Magic, so simply beautiful and so tender!

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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thanks Acaetnna!

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