Dancing on Raindrops

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They say I dance on rain drops
The sweetest dream I walk this night
Perfection is the only, for me

We toast champagne
Don crinoline and bustiers
Fishnets, too short, shorts and boots for mudĀ 

I see only round and new and glowing
Where lives metal, dirt and dead
And you see it through my grin

Every body a future friend
Every light a star
Every note a sole stirring melody

They smile and are jealous
I have left the real and current pain behind
I am aware that for this moment, I alone

Dance on raindrops

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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

Well well..what's this?

This is a rabbit hole into your fine mind, I believe.

How incredibly interesting...I had to read it 4 times.

Fantastic. And that isn't just hublove, Randy ;]


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kennynext 5 years ago from Everywhere

Dancing on raindrops takes so much talent

I really love the way you write

You will never be dragged down in the mud

Your dancing is much too light

great work


AIDY 5 years ago

I love to reveling in your words. Empowering, as always.


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Greetings Ben. This is me at play at a festival. Thanks for the comment. ;)

Hello Kenny. You rhymed for me how sweet you are.

AIDY my dear! I so wish you'd reactivate your hubness and come play with me around HP!


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Tony DeLorger 5 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia

Nice imagery RB. Thanks for sharing.


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MFB III 5 years ago from United States

A stellar moment captured in impeccable words, i felt like I was there, in fact I can see you in your fishnet stckings catching glances like minnows swarming upstream. Lovely write Randy~~~MFB III


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Hi Tony, thanks for reading.

Thanks MFB, minnow glances! Like that :)


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

sounds like someone i want to party with!


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Nikki you are welcome to come if you're not afraid of sleeping in a tent and can manage your liquor. Alas Earthdance, our favorite festival, got too big and has moved on too a bigger venue. But it was fuuuuun while it lasted.


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

well ive slept in a tent before and i defintely have a high tolerance for alcohol. hmm never heard of these festivals but they sound aawesomee!


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

They're better than just going to a concert because the experience is broader with stage art, costumes, freaky people and great music of course.


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

damn they need one to come to New Orleans. we have voodoo fest and stuff but ive never been to any of those, too expensive. too crowded.


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Frieda Babbley 5 years ago from Saint Louis, MO

Love this much!


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

As far as I know Nikki, Earthdance is held all over the World simultaneously.

Hi Frieda, so very nice to see you round these parts! I always value your opinion.


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Tom Rubenoff 5 years ago from United States

Glorious jubilant energy! Love it.


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Well thanks Tom, always a pleasure. :)


Doug Turner Jr. 5 years ago

Hmm, I've never heard being on LSD at Woodstock described so elegantly.


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Cute. Not exactly... I'm a good girl.

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