Poem : Dangerous!

Dangerous!


I need you to go

Where ever

you want to

Because I know

that we are all

already sitting

on Death row.

You made this

place

A war zone

Where no one

is ever safe,

Especially when

you have the

information

that they are

usually

home alone.

To be fair

I would give

A higher level

Survival rate

When you are

inside your home,

But the truth is

It makes

no difference

Anymore.

But your chances

of getting easily

cut down are

greatly increased

Once you step

out of your door,

Boy oh boy!

There’s no place

safe anymore.

A stray bullet here,

A mugger over there.

A drunk driver here,

A depressed husband

Over there.

A frustrated child

Over here,

An angry veterian

over there,

Man for sure

there’s not

too many people

Anymore

Who do

sincerely care!

I came here to live,

But somehow

I feel myself

quickly dying,

I have nothing

more to give,

When everywhere

that I reside

I am seeing people

that are trying

to survive

by entering that

race to nowhere!

I thought I hit the

Home run,

That ball got lost

in the sun

it will not be

coming back.

But here it is again

throwing everything

off the track

It seems that ball

Had never really

left the park.

All the years

From dawn till dusk

I played with it

Here it comes again

making me famous

in another way.

Dangerous!

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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Thank you dear "AE" Just like I told you, and here it is. I was getting ready to send you this video, without any comment, to answer to. While thinking how to send it, by which means, I sat at the computer and right before my eyes there you were commenting to my hub.

It a long standing custom in many cultures that when you speak or think of someone and they show up in any way ,they would live pretty long.

I never had any reason to doubt one as such , because it involves no power over you just a good thing and another good thing.

About the video Harry was one big star there his name iconic .

There must be still pocket of clothes washing in the river in some areas , but like with everything else everyone there and they are pride filled people at heart, every son and daughter who traveled, the purpose was always family.

It's a blessed island whose population only goes down . There are more Grenadians outside than on the island. When I left 35 years ago there were more people than there is now. Strict rules, and stringent upbringing and that' the way it had to be, based on what one could afford in a family.

You have kids when you are an adult.

Tourism was great there .

Thanks as always "AE" for always being the person that you are and as we always say it came from experience.

Of course may the continued blessings of the Most High God, continues to bless and protect you and yours through out.

Give Thanks.

Bless.


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Thank you Sky for the video..I loved it..What a beautiful place..Harry Belafonte is one of my favorite actore. I can't believe he's getting old..He's so handsome..Why would you ever want to leave the Island? I guess the people are poor. Is it the same as in the video? Women washing clothes in the ocean. I hope not..Thank you again...


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Thank you Eddy for such great words in comment and I will say this , I am one who write instantly anywhere and on anything that's available . But I am sure happy that usually when reading your comments , thank heavens I am in front of the computer , your comments and not just this one, they are heartfelt and encouraging, there is this sincerity that comes at you word for word .

I am hoping that others have told you this, confirming what I do see, but I am sure of what i am saying so they must have.

Sincere thanks and may the Most High God bless and protect you and yours for all the years to come.As you enjoy our brand new year of 2012.

Bless.


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

Hi Sky, you have a very unique way of expressing yourself and you do this brilliantly.

This one accompanied by the song is a true gem.

Take care my dear friend and I have to award this one an up up and awaayyy !!!

Have an amazing New Year.

Take care

Eddy.


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedd...

Nothing I fear only myself. So I pray to be kept in Gods way.

Now you dear lady will life for a very long time . I tell you why very soon at least you got my great news to you.

I thanks you for your reading and always great comment , which encourages and inspires every time.

Hope you enjoy seeing a little of my birthplace and the song.

Bless.


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Hello Sky, I can remember when the home was the safest place to be, now i'm not so sure.. We can't let fear keep us from enjoying life.. GREAT write....


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Thanks brethren Frank . No shrapnel here so I know you are just COOL.

Thanks as always for reading ans your great comments.

Bless.


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

Wow Sky this dangerous poem was absoluetly explosive!!!! Loved it


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Bless brethren . I 'll be seeing you soon.

Give Thanks.


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goego 4 years ago from Loserland

double double vision vision

bless


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

How are you stranger , the last I saw of you was when you were having some duplication problems. Great to know that all is well and that you are jamming. You are the first here .

Great to see you Irie mon!

Bless.


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

How are you stranger , the last I saw of you was when you were having some duplication problems. Great to know that all is well and that you are jamming.

Great to see you Irie mon!

Bless.


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goego 4 years ago from Loserland

1:33 walk and don't look back...jammin'

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