Darkness of love gone

Darkness of Love gone

Darkness has consumed me,

Where there once was light.

You told me I was beautiful,

from our very first night.

Now alone in the dark is where

I sit, feeling every ounce of pain.

I never saw the knife you used,

that would cut open my vein.

All though no actual blood was

spilt from my wounded heart.

I can hear the screams of agony,

in my head of love dieing start.

I want to reach out to you,

and feel your love again.

To hold me in your arms,

as my heart's mending begins.

Only when I close my eyes

can I feel your light on me.

Once I wake the vision turns

you are gone and I cry for thee.

I gave you everything of me

that I could possibly give.

Now alone with my broken heart,

and in darkness I live.

Comments 5 comments

Johnny Love 5 years ago

To feel this is to live it. Ouch 4E. very beautiful is the darkness. Mystery to the light and lover of the pain. Very deep.


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4elements 5 years ago Author

Thank you johnny, yes, I am living it! In fact most of my poems that i have ever written has something of and emotional tie to me. Thank you for reading and commenting.


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nighthag 5 years ago from Australia

Powerful pain filled words, a poem I felt with every line.


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N.E. Wright 5 years ago from Bronx, NY

Hey 4elements,

This is sad, and yet beautiful.

Thanks for sharing.

N.E.


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4elements 5 years ago Author

Thank you N E yes some of my poems are sad but tThat is because when i write them I am going thru something painful and it helps cope when I can put my words on paper or in this case, screen. Thank you so much for reading and leaving a comment. Blessings to you.

Nighthag it is always lovely seeing you grace my hubs, and i mean that. You are a very possitive influience on me and my writings and yet we have never met, Here's to the power of words that will bond strangers who turn into friends, blessings to you

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