Darkness (tanka)

They speak of darkness

To one who has never seen

And with every word

There comes the stark reminder

Of who it is that is blind


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Faith Reaper 16 months ago from southern USA

Wow, very profound!


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bravewarrior 16 months ago from Central Florida

Right on, Martin!


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Shyron E Shenko 16 months ago

Martin, thank you, the mind sees more than the eyes.

This is beautiful

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Blessings my friend and thank you for the following.


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always exploring 16 months ago from Southern Illinois

Sometimes the blind can see so much more with their heart. This is beautiful!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 16 months ago from Riga, Latvia

Sometimes people don't even see what is before them and thereby let opportunities slide by

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