Darling Surrender (poem)

My darling surrender to here and now

Where heartbeats and kisses build what will be

And eyes softly closed will teach use to see

Set all else aside let feelings avow

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Let us not hold back what yearns to be free

Flowing with moments as dreams show us how

A glimpse of forever will time endow

My darling surrender and walk with me

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Let us be a cloud a whisper a breeze

Let us be a stream the rushes the scent

Let us be the dawn refreshment anew

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This moment is ours to partake of these

Let us not ponder where wishes went

My darling surrender as shall I too

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eHealer 4 years ago from Las Vegas

Mhatter, you've done it again. You are so creative, this is very beautiful. Perfect song as always, and a great romantic photo! Voted up! You still Rock!


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Ryem 4 years ago from Maryland

The feeling of letting down all of your guards and letting love take over is entirely beautiful. You've put those feelings into a perfect poem. Voted up


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coffeegginmyrice 4 years ago from Toronto, Ontario

Surrender! Yes, surrender to LOVE! Beautiful, romantic poem. The picture is erotic and lovely, it is sending my imaginations beyond the rainbow's end. I played the soothing video while I read the poem again.


Janhorner 4 years ago

This has to be one of the best poems I've read. Simply beautiful and full of love and passion.

Jan


Valleypoet 4 years ago

Good work my friend, enjoyed this:-))


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btrbell 4 years ago from Mesa, AZ

Beautiful! well done! voted up and awesome!


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PHILLYDREAMER 4 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

Theres nothing better than the feeling of letting you inhibitions go, and letting nature take its course.


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christin53 4 years ago from UK

This is my kind of poem:) Voted up and sharing.


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

This is truly the way that true love and trust will come to us.


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pstraubie48 4 years ago from sunny Florida

mhatter...Let go of whatever holds us back and go toward the sweet abandon. You said this so well...this has been a road I have traveled sometime in my distant past. This is a poem to read and reread.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

One word - fantastic and romantic. passing it on.


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

Sensuous and romantic. Great picture and the music is fabulous.


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jhamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

Ok, I am currently working on 99 love Sonnets about my relationship with my wife, I think you may have read the first two. It is not an original idea but seems to be a repeated Sonnet theme by some of the greats. I hope that we can talk about our journeys with the Sonnet as I go. Jamie

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