Dating Lesson 1431.311 – Clues (limerick)

On her every heartbeat was spent

The flowers and letters he sent

On his lover true

Who did not share view

She moved without clue where she went


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

I absolutely hate it when that happens! LOL


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

That just wasn't very nice, was it! Good one, M.


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Oh, no! What a cold woman...


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

wow was she mad at him? Oh My ..lol ,.. This is great poem.. Love to visit your hubs.

sharing

Debbie


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

Mhatter99,

ROFL, :)


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

That was a big move!


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shara63 4 years ago from Delhi

she is again in question ?


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Motherbynature 4 years ago from Los Angeles, CA

That's cold. LOL


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PHILLYDREAMER 4 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

I've had this happen to me, and it was a very painful lesson to learn.


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

LOL funny as usual


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barbergirl28 4 years ago from Hemet, Ca

I am really loving your limmericks! This one is no different! How fun is that... ok... not really... you have to really hate when something like this happens!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

lol Heard of these things before.


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MartieCoetser 4 years ago from South Africa

What a tragic story!


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carol7777 4 years ago from Arizona

Sad but true...Sometimes there are no answers for actions. That is hard to take.


LikaMarie 4 years ago

Clever way of stating heartache and pain. I guess we all have it in us...


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myownlife 4 years ago from london

poor him. apparently she is Unkind .


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Where she went, nobody knew..Bad woman..HaHa


osa agbonlahor 4 years ago

I love that you write a lot of limericks, because I'm a big fan of them, but I've never been much good at writing them unfortunately.

I'm glad I'm following you so I get to read all your great limericks.

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