Dawn (tanka)

Dawn awoke again

Shedding hope upon the world

She whispered to me

Come out and find the magic

That I have waiting for you


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Faith Reaper 15 months ago from southern USA

Woo, I love this Tanka here ... so much is stated with few words. Excellent!


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Phyllis Doyle 15 months ago from High desert of Nevada.

Up, Awesome, Beautiful - I love it !


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bravewarrior 15 months ago from Central Florida

Looks like he could use a break from hitting the books. What better way than some afternoon delight?


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teaches12345 15 months ago

Reminds me of how I feel when I see the sunrise on the beach. However, the reference here is just as delightful.


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Glenis Rix 13 months ago from UK

Delightful, and clever :)

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