Dear Life

Dear Life,

I’m tired…I’m weak…I know longer feel like moving my feet…
I lost of hope…I lost of faith…I lost everything…I live behind a shade..
I’m weakening inside…I’m storming inside…I’m raining inside…alone…

My chest is tight…my body has weaken…my soul no longer live
Left behind an empty body…

I worked so hard…I am tired…
I am tired…please somebody help me…

I worked six years…I make lots of money…but everything I earn I give it to my family…
I support them…now I left nothing…I turn to them…they turn me down…

Emptiness…lost…confused…tortured…pain…crushed…hammered…default…
No longer my heart feel strong…weakened….


Chest tighten
Heart aching..
Body shaking
Life breaking…

My soul has left my body
My spirits no longer live..
Just left this empty body
Like a shell that can’t be sheltered…

The haunting feeling inside…now rule to show the world...
Depress…weakened…shaken….
I’m tired…

Here as I lay in bed
Just like I lay in grave…
Feeling hopeless…
Depress…
Stress…all day…


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ciaron davies 5 years ago

I voted up, thanks for sharing.


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Ebower 5 years ago from Georgia

I think we've all felt this way before. Thanks for conveying emotion so beautifully. I voted this up and awesome. :)


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chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA Author

Hi ciaron and Ebower, thank you! :)


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apurva joshi 5 years ago from INDIA

great one...


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chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA Author

Hi apurva, thanks! :)


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Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

Thanks for sharing this gem and here's to many more hubs to share.

Take care

Eiddwen.


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chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA Author

Hi Eiddwen, thank you! :)


Chanthy 5 years ago

Wow, you are so good and expressing your feeling. I will subscribe you.

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