Dear Dad’s Final Words (limerick)

Remember the words dear dad said

While laying upon death’s dark bed

From this misery

My son set me free

I can’t see T.V. move your head


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billybuc 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

A man who had his priorities in order. LOL


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jbshaban 3 years ago from California

Ba dum bum. AND a high hat. A perfect limerick.


Valleypoet 3 years ago

There is nothing worse than missing an episode of your favourite soap...and it's not like he is going to be able to catch up later! LOL:-))


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travmaj 3 years ago from australia

Can't control the laughter - this is perfect...


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wetnosedogs 3 years ago from Alabama

very funny.


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petenali 3 years ago from Ontario, Canada

Good one!


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida

Mhatter99...Sorry but your words are " remote" to me...Great limerick..


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breakfastpop 3 years ago

I am moved beyond words. In fact, I'm laughing! Up and funny!


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stars439 3 years ago from Louisiana, The Magnolia and Pelican State.

Perfectly awesome. Great limerick. God Bless You.


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drbj 3 years ago from south Florida

No question about it, you just passed the test.

This one, Martin, has to be one of your best!

:)


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Dad wasn't that far gone mentally, was he?


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jhamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

very funny, my dad would do the same I am sure. Jamie


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Good one!


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Isn't it frustrating to be cut off from our favourite TV programs? fun and loved it.


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tillsontitan 3 years ago from New York

Now that's a man after my own heart....you know how I love my movies.

Voted up and funny, with a ring of truth though.


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James-wolve 3 years ago from Morocco

Haha. I liked this one. Nicely done. I'm going to go find another to comment:)


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Oh, you're soooooo bad!


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shanmarie 3 years ago from Texas

Not sure what to say to that. LOL

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