Deep Is Your Love - Romantic Poem By Cathy Nerujen

About this poem:

This romantic poem came to me one night as I was working on a layout for a new magazine for writers, poets and artists. It seemed to capture the feelings I had for this beautiful, and very special person in my life. I wrote it until it became just how I wanted it to be - a reflection of my feelings for a wonderful lady.

Deep Is Your Love

It sends me down rivers –
it sends me so deep –
your tender soft wishes -
like waterfalls weep -
night time it breathes you –
soft like a leaf -
rain it becomes me –
melt in your heat –

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lips they caress you –
soft is your mouth -
love it becomes you -
sleepless without –
tangled warm bed sheets –
tightly held hands –
woven and roaming –
across open lands –

eyes of you see me –
sign from the sky –
twirling like snowdrops –
kissing me nigh –
fruit of your womb-wish -
so joyous and rare –
gladdens my tummy –
we float in the air –

let us be lovers –
oh sweet night - we come –
over and under –
let two become one –
sister to sister –
my angel above -
so dreamlike - your magic-
so deep is your love.

Copyright (c) 2013 - 2016 Cathy Nerujen. All Rights reserved.

This poem is lovingly dedicated to Marifel Dungo. It is a very musical poem and rhymes smoothly and easily. I am so lucky to have her in my life. She is amazing. Her name on HubPages is Baise25. She is also now one of the most popular and most well-read bloggers in the Philippines, with her blog philpad.com. And like many successful authors, she also writes on HubPages as Blaise25. And thank you to Cassy for the wonderful kindness and support in my life and in my writing always.

This new poem is just one of several poems in a series of romantic poetry I am publishing on Hub Pages. There are many more poems in a book of romantic poems coming in late 2016.

Check our my new writing magazine on www.flashstarmagazine.com
This magazine encompasses several genres of writing, including poetry, and features some writers from HubPages.

Please feel free to leave a comment about my poem below. Thank you.

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blaise25 2 years ago from close to you...

Sincere as a promise, deep as a sea, this is so beautiful. Your poetry is a flame bigger than the sun. It always pull me in. I love you so much. I wanna snuggle and kiss you now baby. You mean the world to me.

Mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah

XOXOXOXOXOXOXO

*heart and soul*

Fehl


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Astra Nomik 2 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Fehl, my honeybunny. :)

Gosh, I love your description here. Yes, it is like that...

A flame bigger than the sun... Well, I hope it is not that hot. LOL. I am teasing, Fehl. I think you will know what it is about, the first verse is the revealer...

I love writing poems about you, poems for you. I love you so much. You mean the world to me as well, Fehl. I love your poetry so much and I love your new one as well. I hope everyone goes to your hubs and reads it.

Mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah :)

You are the sweetest woman in my Universe, baby.

Always and Forever.

Cathy


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Made 2 years ago from Finland

Isn't it amazing when the words just start coming and you have no other options than writing them down, and the result is a beautiful poem like this!? It was wonderful and emotional poem.


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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida

Beautiful! I don't know how long you have been together, but each poem you write speaks of a burning joy, love and passion. May the embers never go out, Cathy!


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James-wolve 2 years ago from Morocco

Awwwh, I loved this one.

It was so beautiful and sweet.

Everything flowed very well and the imagery was a joy to read.


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois

Cathy this is so beautiful. Your words of love touches the heart, sincere and passionate. Loved it. Thank you for sharing.....


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Astra Nomik 2 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Made, thank you for the follow and for the nice comments. Yes i do love it when the words flow just like water when I am thinking of the very special person in my life. She inspires my words and so much more. I just have a small wish with this poem - I wish the poem was longer. LOL. Some poetry can be so dark and incredible and show all kinds of things. My poetry is mostly about love, and I guess I will always be a romantic at hear, Made.

I will be reading more of your hubs. I hope your day is sweet.

Hi bravewarrior, how are you today? Oh wow, what a comment from you. Um... burning joy, love and passion... that is very correct.

Hehehe. Yes that describes my poetry about Fehl so much. We have known each other in Hub Pages and beyond hubs for some years now. since the start of 2010 I believe. She is a very special lady. and I love her so much. She is a romantic poet at heart as well.

She wrote a brand new hub and you should check it out. :)

Oh those love embers... I think the embers have a mind of their own. We have such a deep connection. I treasure our relationship so much. She is my soulmate. I can't help writing poems about her. I know she will be so happy to read your words here. Bless you. :)

Hi james-wolve - thank you for these comments on my new poem Deep Is Your Love. It's on the page almost just as I wrote it in my notebook... I wrote it in one go, then a second pass to improve the rhyme and flow. See? Even my words here are rhyming. LOL.

Yes, flow and how a poem scans is important. Thank you for the comments. Enjoy my other poems here, as well. Images I always try to optimise for Pinterest, so the poem will be pinned and others can come check out my poetry. I am a fan of that social media. Thank you again.

Have a sweet day. :)


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Astra Nomik 2 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Cathy this is so beautiful. Your words of love touches the heart, sincere and passionate. Loved it. Thank you for sharing.....

Hi Ruby my wonderful friend. How are you today? I hope life is treating you good. Thank you for reading my new poem. The person I wrote this for is so beautiful, so it has to be beautiful for her. :)

You know my poems and my way of writing so well. Yes, if they touch a heart, then I am so happy. I wrote this in between snatches of breaks from editing the Flashstar magazine coming in December.

Oh I am always happy sharing my poems with you and you are among my very favorite poets and writers here, Ruby. I hope Christmas is a happy time for everyone and for you. I hope you have a sweet and wonderful day. Lots of hugs from me.

Cathy :)


Sannel 2 years ago

Cathy, oh, wow. . . This is so romantic, sweet and beautiful! It warms my heart to come here to read your poetry that reveal the strong love you have for your Fehl. It's inspiring , wonderful and so romantic.

I wish you and Fehl a blessed and happy Christmas!

Hugs,

Sannel


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DDE 2 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Deep Is Your Love - Romantic Poem By Cathy Nerujen is indeed a beautiful poem so well thought of.


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Nikkij504gurl 2 years ago from Louisiana

Deep and magical. Keep the love alive.


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jhamann 2 years ago from Reno NV

Perfectly rhymed with a well crafted rhythm, beautiful poetry. Jamie


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Astra Nomik 2 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Sannel, thank you for coming over and leaving a nice comment. How are you? I hope you are well, my friend. How is Sweden this time of year? It must be so snowy and Christmassy. LOL.

Yes, if it's my poetry, it's going to be romantic, Sannel. Hehehe. I am like you, I write from the heart always. It's one of the many things we have in common. Yes, it is a strong love, that is true. We are a few years as a couple and Fehl is so special and so loving. She is inspiring, and so wonderful and very romantic ... so much of what you find in my poetry is all thanks to her. And she is a terrific writer and a smart business woman. Honestly, she is just born to be a successful person, and she will be. I support her totally. I love her so much... :)

She is a very successful blogger now. Some of her writing in "Philpad.com", her blog - has gone viral. She should teach blogging because she is expert at it.

Thank you for the lovely Christmas wishes, and I will pass them on to Fehl for you. You should pop by her hubs ("blaise25" and "twentyfive" are her two names on HubPages) and say hi to her. She is a huge fan, Sannel. Your writing is always fantastic to everyone. You inspire us all.

I am so delighted you have produced a new book - "Melvin ... bad bad kitten" on sale on Amazon. I advertised it on my blog this week. I will buy it for Christmas for my young cousins.

Have a peaceful and joyful and healthy Christmas, my friend. Lots of warm hugs and smiles from me - from us.

Cathy XOX


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Astra Nomik 2 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi DDE, thank you for this. Someone asked me when is the last time I wrote a sad love poem, and I can't remember any more. All I have are beautiful happy days and being with my sweet lady Fehl is the reason. She makes such a difference in my life. I'm glad you are enjoying my poems and you are such a loyal fan too. :)

I hope you are looking forward to Christmas. I certainly am.

I was fascinated by your new hub "The Envious Friend" you wrote. What an unusual hub. But oh, what an interesting situation to find yourself in. It really got me wondering about settling in to a new neighborhood and with such things going on around you. You wrote a great hub about a seldom spoken of issue, the subject of envy. I hope it gets lots of read. I know many people can probably relate to what you wrote there. My friend Cassy had a similar experience when she was a teenager and spent a summer in Kenya. Viewed as an outsider and with suspicion.... you should read her hubs... but I don't know if she made a hub about her times in Kenya or not...

Have a sweet day, DDE. Have a wonderful peaceful and (less envy-filled) Christmas.

Hi Nikki, yes we keep the magic and the love special, and so alive. That is so like you to say that. Thank you, Nikki. I love you for this. You are such a good friend. ^_^

Oh wow, we are almost ready with the first issue of the magazine and I am so busy editing it, and your work has been added. I think it will be great and will be well received when we go live a few days from now. Thank you for wanting to be part of our first Issue of Flashstar.

I hope your Christmas brings you what you most want, Nikki. Big Christmassy hugs and snuggles from me. LOL.

Jhamann, you are great to notice the rhythm, as my poems tend to be lyrical and musical some times. The poem was not as rhymed on the first draft. But the second "pass" I did on it made the rhyme kick more. I like words to have a rhythm now and then, as it can add something more to the poem. Words can have such an affect on us...

Have a great day and a happy warm festive greeting to you. Enjoy your Christmas. :)


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shanmarie 2 years ago from Texas

Beautiful words, Astra Nomik.


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Astra Nomik 2 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Shanmarie.... thank you for the comment. Bless you.

Have a sweet day. :)


Sannel 2 years ago

Thank you, Cathy for your beautiful reply to my comment. :-) I'll definitely visit Fehl here on HP and her blog. I find both you and Fehl to be quite a remarkable couple. So talented in what you do and very, very sweet and lovely.

Aww. . . Thank you for the kind words, and also advertising my children's book on your blog. I truly appreciate it, sweet friend. I hope your young cousins will have fun with Melvin.

I wish you and Fehl a beautiful, romantic and loving holiday. Many, many Christmassy hugs,

Sannel xoxoxo


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Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Beautifully written


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Astra Nomik 2 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Gosh, thank you Sannel. Your comment has me smiling so much. I love following your blog - http://www.sannellarson.blogspot.se ... I don't mind giving it a plug here, because it is wonderful. Sannel, I always knew you to be a very talented writer the moment I found your writing.

Well, you know me, I love supporting writers and writing talent. Your new book "Scent of a Haiga" on Blurb looks so promising and wonderful. Vincent Moore has published with Blurb as well.

Us a sweet couple? Really? Wow. I am blushing now. Fehl will be so happy seeing these lovely words, Sannel. Thank you. You are so sweet, and it's you who deserves big hugs from us both. Bless you.

Yes, I had a lovely relaxing Holiday over the Christmas. I didn't realize how worn out I was. LOL. :P

We're pushing ahead with the new magazine we are creating. And we are always delighted for great writers to add their brilliance to its pages. If you ever feel like submitting anything, I would be delighted to read it, Sannel.

Fehl allows me to send you her hugs and smiles and more. Cassy also sends her best wishes to you, Sannel. We hope you are doing okay and in good health. Have a wonderful restful transition into the new year and may your 2014 be prosperous and fruitful.

Lots of Love from me, always -

Cathy XOXOXO


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Astra Nomik 2 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Gypsy Rose Lee, thank you for the nice comment. Have a sweet day. :)


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Dim Flaxenwick 2 years ago from Great Britain

Beautiful, Cathy. Your words made me melt.


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Astra Nomik 2 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Dim. Wow, if my words are doing that then I am happy. I mean that in a good way of course. My poetry seems to have that effect on people.


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manatita44 2 years ago from london

Extremely beautiful!!


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Astra Nomik 2 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi manatita44, thank you for this. I'm glad you are enjoying my romantic poetry. Have a sweet day.


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Torrs13 2 years ago from California

I really enjoyed reading this poem :) I think I will have to check out more of your work! I used to write poetry as well but it has been awhile. Maybe I will try to get back into it. Thanks for the inspiration!


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Astra Nomik 2 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Torr13, thank you for the sweet comment. I am going places with my poetry and I created a magazine for writers, including poets. I have always been a poet at heart. I will check out your hubs today.

I hope you give poetry another try and try writing some poems. I'm glad I inspired somebody today. Poetry is awesome. :)

Have a sweet day.


JanikaLeeReyes 2 years ago

Beautiful Cathy! I could feel my heart beat and melt with each line. You have such powerful ways of touching your readers souls. You take us along these journeys, and we almost always hope it never ends. If only someone can write something as beautiful as this for me someday. When I think of it, I am almost jealous!! Hahaha, of her of course!

with love always,

Nika


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Astra Nomik 2 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Janika. The thing that makes my pen run red with romantic poetry is passion and love. Someone told me the passion bleeds from the words I write. It's sort of there, I think. When a person touches me so deeply, the words are a hundred times more everything....

It is a journey for me as well, honey. It is very much a journey....

Um, has anyone ever written romantic poems for you? Geez... did they give you cards with poems on them, even?

Oh don't be jealous. Fehl is an Angel. She is very decent and so loving. She is a big fan of your amazing writing, as am I.

Thank you for the plug for Flashstar magazine on your profile, Janika. Wow, you are so good to do that. XOX

Have a sweet day, Janika. I hope love finds you always and sees the amazing person you are.

Cathy


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KenDeanAgudo 2 years ago from Tiwi, Philippines

Wow! Full of emotion and love. The poem is a representation of things that are hard to say. Words are sometimes the best way to express what words cant express.

Very passionate. Love this one!


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joedolphin88 2 years ago from north miami FL

great emotion and word choice. Excellent expression as well.


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Astra Nomik 2 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi KenDeanAgudo, I am smiling at your comment here. Yes, it full of love and emotion. I wonder did you double check your wording in your comment here? Hehehe :P

But I know it comes from a good place, as questions go... and yes passion is always so close in my poems. Thank you so much. :)

Hi joedolphin88 -

I honestly try to keep my poems simple and easy to understand and get them to appeal to everyone, even if they are written with a special or certain person in mind.

And if people can relate to the subject then I am happy. I try to keep my poetry as "love-positive" as possible.

Cathy

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