Delusional Love


A frozen moment
In a troubled life
Of delusional love
Born of unbearable strife

Desire with passion, with sentiment so real
Mutual respect and affinity to feel
Between strangers with ill fates sealed
Sharing tears over distant time and place
A love without room to grow nor grace
Lust and dreams on an ethereal plane
Was it just another lover's game?
‘Twas a moment in time just the same
When we felt like soul mates
Without shame



© Copyright Maria D'Alessandro 2012. All Rights Reserved.

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traslochimilano 4 years ago from USA

Nice Post


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sweethearts2 4 years ago from Northwest Indiana

Beauty without shame for a moment. Voted up and awesome write.


cleaner3 4 years ago

very beautiful, soft poetry


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MichaelJohnMele 4 years ago from Seffner, Florida

Awesome...I really like your writing style.


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xstatic 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

Those moments somettimes come in a mad rush and too often end in the same way. Up and more!


Vincent Moore 4 years ago

Your work is brilliant without exception. Your poetry full of soulful expression, coming deep from within. I have been absent from your work, I must go back in time and digest each word. Not often a poet comes on the scene with such an extremely passionate mind and heart for verse and music. Peace and blessing to you my poetic genius. Let both our pasts rest and wounds and scars leave us.


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QudsiaP1 4 years ago

Absolutely beautiful! Your words scream out to be heard; to be felt to be sensed. Such feeling such devotion; bravo my friend; bravo indeed.


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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco

And while he holds you tight

and everything feels right

enjoy


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. Loved this the romance, the sadness and the passion. Passing it on.


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epigramman 4 years ago

....well Miss Maria from West Side Story you always thrill this quill with your poetry of passion and artistic precision - and I don't care who this is about (but my betting money would have been on the guy above me or the other guy who practices politics) .....unfortunately women don't write about me but they do take me out for dinner - wine me and dine and then bed me ......so I am doing alright in my little corner of the world - lol lake erie time 8:29pm


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scrittobene 4 years ago from Melbourne Australia Author

@ traslochimilano @ sweethearts2 @ QudsiaP1 - Many thanks dear friends for dropping by

@ cleaner3 @ xstatic - @ Mhatter99 - @ Gypsy Rose Lee - always nice to read the comments made by my regular fans. Thanks for reading this kind Hubbers

@ Vincent Moore - your regular comments have been greatly missed Vincent and I have been the poorer. Thank you for reviewing my hub and for your kind sentiments. What a gift it is to experience even a fleeting moment in time when there is creative affinity and passion shared in a spirit of love. Peace and serenity to you.

@ epigramman – Epi – let the record show that all my poems have a bit of my dear friend in them. LOL


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scrittobene 4 years ago from Melbourne Australia Author

@ MichaelJohnMele - many thanks for reading my hub


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

Oh, how beautiful and thoughtful! Amazingly deep, touching and heartfelt.


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scrittobene 4 years ago from Melbourne Australia Author

@ BeyondMax - Many thanks Max and fellow Aussie Hubber.


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epigramman 4 years ago

...I got balled out for leaving my comment here ...... so much for free speech.


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epigramman 4 years ago

....just looking around (a bit nervous) in sunglasses and a trenchcoat and wondering if it's alright to leave a comment here ..... once again ...... psst I don't live at lake erie anymore and this is not the epi-man ....


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scrittobene 4 years ago from Melbourne Australia Author

Oh Epi - don't let anyone silence you. You are the voice and the heart of Hubpages. This is a soft and gentle and touchy feely reminder that you have unconditional free speech in any of my hubs. May your lips never be pursed in my presence - ha ha ha.


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scrittobene 4 years ago from Melbourne Australia Author

If you would like to hear me recite this poem, please go to:

http://soundcloud.com/scrittobene/delusional-love-...

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