Depth

The shallow pools

Where your hearts lie

You have no soul

Talking your big talk

Narcissism seeping

From your pores

I am tired

Of listening to your

Poisoned words

You talk a big talk

But

Where do you stand

Who are you really

You have no depth

Just a shallow soul

How dare you come

Judge

Where you don't belong

Go talk to ears that listen

There is no one for you here

Anymore


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btrbell 2 years ago from Mesa, AZ

Powerful words. Makes me want to cheer! Up+


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Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

enough is enough... yes powerful stand up and fight type of words in your poem.. and I love the serenity in that swan... awesome


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Nadine May 2 years ago from Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

Wow who are you addressing this to? Very powerful.


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois

Perfect pic. for this deep piece. Awesome!


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Ericdierker 2 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

Inspirational in it's way and profound. I like it.


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BlossomSB 2 years ago from Victoria, Australia

What a great image to begin your poem, and inspirational it really is!


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wayne barrett 2 years ago from Clearwater Florida

Yes, powerful piece! Thumbs up.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. Lovely poetry with strong feelings. Love the picture.


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carolinemd21 2 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Hi Btrbell thank you so much! :)

Hi Frank thank you for stopping by and for your powerful words. lol :)

Hi Nadine, no one in particular, it just came to me. Thank you for your commenting and reading. :)

Hi Ruby thank you dear lady for your kind words. :)

Hi Eric thank you for stopping by and reading! :0

Hi Blossom thank you dear lady for reading and stopping by. :)

Hi Wayne thank you for stopping by! :)

Hi Rasma thank you for your kind words and for stopping by. :)

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