Destinys Defeat


You lay there sleeping

A peaceful slumber

No worries about you

Nothing left to wonder


Years have passed

Mistakes were made

Your perfect score

My failing grade


You opened my eyes

My heart and my mind

A love never known

Never expected to find


My soul wasn’t pure

My heart barely beat

Your standards to high

My destiny – Defeat

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prasetio30 6 years ago from malang-indonesia

Beautiful, simple and understanding. Thanks for share with us. I love your poem. Good to see you here.

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NikiiLeeReyes 6 years ago

Love this poem; I want to see more of your work; very nice!

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Wayne Brown 6 years ago from Texas

An interesting mix of perspectives for the reader to draw from this verse...nice work! WB

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