Devil At Bank (limerick)

I saw devil sitting at bank

With expression dark and so blank

For all his abyss

Did loan clerk dismiss

Who told him that his credit stank


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

hahaha YES, really stinky!!!


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billybuc 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

Been there and starred in the movie. :)


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Cantuhearmescream 3 years ago from New York

Mhatter99,

Oooh, can't say I don't know the feeling!

Awesome!

Cat


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pstraubie48 3 years ago from sunny Florida

Hee heee not funnie, but it is!!!! You keep me coming back, time after time, Martin, my dear.

Have a lovely Friday.

Angels are headed your way :)ps


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travmaj 3 years ago from australia

Ouch. I'm in the same bank -


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wetnosedogs 3 years ago from Alabama

Thanks for the morning laugh.


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Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

damn I'd hate to be the bank clerk when his time comes..LOL great little piece


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James-wolve 3 years ago from Morocco

LoL I ve experienced that feeling before :)


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

It happens to the best of us!


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breakfastpop 3 years ago

Finally, a sensible decision!


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jhamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

Awesome. Jamie


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida

Mhatter99....after my recent bank issue, I could have sworn " he" was working at my bank.....ironic you should choose this subject this week...hmmm..perhaps you are psychic ?


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drbj 3 years ago from south Florida

That loan clerk was surely brave on the whole,

But mark my words, he will pay with his soul.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

A soul for credit I suppose.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

I guess I wouldn't trust him, either.


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Vinaya Ghimire 3 years ago from Nepal

I think I have seen this devil. LOL

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