Did A Wish Come True (limerick)

One day with this thought I was struck

While rabbit’s foot I stroked for luck

One wish I can’t nab it

A dream just can’t grab it

By luck of this rabbit I’m stuck


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DanaTeresa 4 years ago from Ohio

boy do i know that feeling! nicely put. an enjoyable read.


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Oh, yes, been there and done that!


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

I'm not sure there is a remedy for that problem. :) Well done Sir!


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

Stuck and out of luck! I never can get lucky.


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coffeegginmyrice 4 years ago from Toronto, Ontario

You need someone to kick that "luck" out of the rabbit's foot. :)

The rabbit didn't have his luck either for missing a foot. :(


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lrc7815 4 years ago from Central Virginia

How lucky can a rabbit be when it has a chain running through its foot? Seriously? Have you ever wondered? lol On that giggle, I'm through for the night.


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Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

LOL, I am laughting from coffee's and Irc's comments.

Yes, do as they have stated above. LOL (secret - there's no such thing as luck - at least I do not believe)

Good night. God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper


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rcrumple 4 years ago from Kentucky

Be kind to me sir he did beg

he feared what could happen to leg

yet fate did do

took one not two

now three footed bunny with peg

Great job, mh!


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Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

LOL RC, you crack me up too dear one! Pray you are doing well.

God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper


Ghaelach 4 years ago

Hi Martin.

Most of the rabbits I've seen didn't have very nuch luck as they all ended up on the dinner plate.

LOL Ghaelach


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old albion 4 years ago from Lancashire. England.

Morning Hatter. Thanks for my morning smile.

Graham.


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Michele Travis 4 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

I don't have one, but I have not eaten one either :)

Voted up!


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

I often wonder how lucky the rabbit perceives this foot to be!


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wetnosedogs 4 years ago from Alabama

Great chuckles again. Thanks.


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Poor rabbit, it certainly didn't bring him much luck either. Voted up.


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Poor rabbit, it certainly didn't bring him much luck either. Voted up.


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coffeegginmyrice 4 years ago from Toronto, Ontario

Rich, that's funny! I can picture a pirate bunny!


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pearlmacb 4 years ago from Switzerland

Lol. A good read! I dont believe in luck :)


Sueswan 4 years ago

So much for luck. lol

Voted up


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Poor Bunny lost his foot. He had no luck at all..Smiles..


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

I liked this. You know from ages past I still have a blue rabbit's foot.


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vespawoolf 4 years ago from Peru, South America

So true! Another pithy one, Mhatter!


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

Oh yes brilliant once again and I award you with my 'Up up and away!!!!'!

Enjoy your day.


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ignugent17 4 years ago

Hope you are enjoying your wish now. :-)))


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teaches12345 4 years ago

Funny, so funny. Good thing I don't count on luck to make my life work. :)

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