Did It Happen (poem)

Were they just dreams for a moment

Those let us pretend which lingered awhile

Those once upon a time in shadows

Of did it really happen at all

-

It’s hard to believe

It’s hard to conceive

-

Even when time stopped ticking

So an instance may kiss a heart

So a dream may spark a memory

Of did it really happen at all

-

Children at play

So far away

-

The tokens of enchantments have disappeared

Leaving only a far away gleam

Leaving the mirrored pathway of a soul

Of did it really happen at all

-

Questions still churn

Casting return

-

Were they just dreams of another

Reminders of once what we once held

Reminders of something forgotten

Of did it really happen at all

-

Or was it a dream

A far away theme

Comments 10 comments

annart profile image

annart 3 years ago from SW England

Lovely rhythm here between the short and long verses. It leaves us thinking about our own reality and dreams. Beautiful! Ann


kidscrafts profile image

kidscrafts 3 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

I love the rhythm of this poem! Very beautiful! Lovely picture at the top of an Adirondack chair at the edge of a lake with a wonderful sky!


billybuc profile image

billybuc 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

I agree with the comments before; this flows beautifully and leaves the reader in contemplation. Well done!


bravewarrior profile image

bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Far away memories often have us wondering if it really happened or if we dreamed it. Sometimes they can be both - a memory and a dream. This is a really pretty poem, Martin.


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

You hit home with a common theme which people can relate to.

At this time in our life, we look back at times so very long ago. They do seem like a hazy memory or did it really happen the way we remember it?

A super poem, Martin.

DJ.


BlossomSB profile image

BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

You have chosen such a universal theme here, something that we can all relate to and the words of your poem flow smoothly, with a great rhythm, too. It reminds me that, not only do I wonder if an event really happened, but was the way I saw it the way it really happened? Did others see it that way?


Faith Reaper profile image

Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Truly gives one pause ... as to our own reality.

Superb dear, Mh!

Up and more and sharing

God bless, Faith Reaper


vkwok profile image

vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

Another amazing, target-hitting poem, Martin.


Gypsy Rose Lee profile image

Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. Poetry to dream upon.


aviannovice profile image

aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Another beauty in the annals of Martin.

    Sign in or sign up and post using a HubPages Network account.

    0 of 8192 characters used
    Post Comment

    No HTML is allowed in comments, but URLs will be hyperlinked. Comments are not for promoting your articles or other sites.


    Click to Rate This Article
    working