Distraught

Rodent conquer thy kingdom
Wicked ill will
Denial thy mistress…
Depress she live distress

Her rose dry up like coal
From thy unworthy act
Left her hard to swallow
Tears that left her soul

Thou loved before
But too soon disappear
Left her empty shell
Wandering in wonder why love betray

Thou left her hatred
In such hell
Beaten down inside the inner self
distraught

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Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

You are experimenting with poetic style. From a simple prose poem you have gone deeper with poetry meter.


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chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA Author

Hi Vinaya, thanks! :)

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