Does it Always End? - a Poem about Relationships and Goodbyes

Goodbye seems to happen way too often.
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Does It Always End?

So this is how it ends?

Not even dead, but gone.

Once light and alive--

flaming, unquenched,

rising with the sun,

and never setting . . .

and yet it ends.


What makes it end?

It wafts and falters,

soon dimming,

cooling off,

settling to nothing,

so soon it's gone.

Isn't it?


What keeps it around?

Keeps it warm and burning,

still surprising,

rising at least

to some expectation

enough, anyway . . .

Does it always end?


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Lucky Cats 4 years ago from The beautiful Napa Valley, California

Hi Victoria...it certainly seems like this is the way it ends. I think that relationships based primarily on attraction, without much else, are doomed to this end. The old cliches' hold, Ive learned...that friendship that turns into love is a much more complete relationship. The hot burning scintillating fires burn out quickly...leaving smouldering embers..which eventually become cold and turn to dust. This is how I read your beautiful poem..UP Awesome Beautiful.


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

What a wonderful poem to read in this lazy afternoon.


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arb 4 years ago from oregon

"Ever has it been that love knows not its own depth, until the hour of separation" Which of us does not believe it is forever and then proceed to take care of it, as though it were. Perhaps better to take care of it knowing everything in life will come against it. None the less, this was elegantly expressed. Be well Victoria!


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

Wow, Lucky Cats, I think your response was more poetic than my poem. LOL. Beautiful comment! Thanks for reading and for the votes!


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

Victoria.....Now I'm sad. You've stirred some disappointing memories. But that's not a bad thing. Sometimes, as the adage goes...."Those who do not remember the past, are doomed to repeat it."

I love arb's comment.....it' very true. UP++


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

Glad you enjoyed it, Vinaya!


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago

Crushing memories that can bring any one down. However, like any other day, we get up and face this world...taking our task of life with positivism and joy. What really matters is how good we can feel by just inspiring others. For instance, this piece of yours. Excellent words with profound meanings yet with hope.


Vincent Moore 4 years ago

Goodbyes are such bitter sorrow and thus comes the end when the blend that was there at the beginning fades into oblivion. A sad truth as life deals us the cards and the joker is cruel when two hearts are mixed and shuffled and tossed to the floor without a farewell or adieu.

Oh how I cried when I said goodbye and the long road awaited me as I strive to survive loss love. Voted Up, you stirred some of my past and I felt a tug at my heart's sting. Bravo my poetic friend.


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

arb, where is that quotation from? You're right in that we just have to go on as if everything will last. Nice comments! And I will try to be well! You're a kind soul.


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

Effer--Don't be sad; it's just life, huh? arb always has some neat comments. Good to see you again!!


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arb 4 years ago from oregon

If I remember correctly, Gibran. Been a while but I'm pretty sure. It is the lost of anything which makes us hold it all the tighter the next time we have it. And, there is always a next time.


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

As you said Vicki, it's just life. We have all been through it. You did a wonderful job of capturing feelings we all have felt. Great hub!


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

Thanks, lord. Yep, every day we just have to get up and go! So true!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

A wonderful read. Voted up! xoxo


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LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

Beautifully said, and wonderful poem; sad though! Life is strange.... Enjoyed reading it, voting up!


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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

Poignant write Victoria--really well done!


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anupma 4 years ago from India

Beautifully written. A few lines reveals the deep pain of heart.

Voted up and awesome.


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

beautiful poem.


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xstatic 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

Wonderful poem with many great comments! I can only echo those and vote Up and all but funny. I have been there more than once.


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Vellur 4 years ago from Dubai

An end is never the end, it is the sart of something new, exciting and worthwhile. So, I've heard - do not know if it's true. Loved your poem. Voted up.


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

Vincent, your comments are always so poetic and beautiful. Your words ring, too. Glad you came by. Always a pleasure.


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Seeker7 4 years ago from Fife, Scotland

What a very deep and vivid picture you paint in this wonderful piece of work. It's heart renching when a relationship ends but I always used to try - somehow - to see it as new beginning and moving onto something better!

I loved this poem - awesome!


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Perspycacious 4 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

I like.


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

Always a next time, arb. So true. Always hope.


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

Thanks, Bill! Glad you came by. Thanks for the compliment!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Unfortunately there are relationships that are doomed from the very start and yes, they must come to an end. Very well expressed. Liked it.


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

Thanks, unknown spy. Glad you enjoyed the poem!


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

LaThing. Thanks so much. Yes, life is strange. Thanks for reading....


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

Thanks, Audrey. I love the word "poignant"!


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Ruchira 4 years ago from United States

oh yeah...things do come to an end. You narrated it well, my friend

Change is never constant and it gotta end...cheers to another new beginning :)


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

anupma and cleaner3--Thanks for your kind comments.


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

I've been there, too, xstatic. Thanks for adding your comments!


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

Vellur--Some say that endings are only beginnings, that we just don't know it at the time. I think this is true in many cases. Thanks for stopping by!


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

Seeker7--I try to do that, too, but it's hard sometimes--with relationships, friendships, jobs....I'm glad you came by. Thanks for the input!


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

Perspycacious--What a nice, succinct comment!


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

Gypsy--Thanks for the input. You are so right about relationships.


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teaches12345 4 years ago

You have a great talent and use it well in your poems. This one could be talking about a relationship or just a look at a day in life. Great imagery.


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

Ruchira--Good way to look at it...as a beginning. Change always comes....


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

Thanks, teaches! That's very sweet of you to say! And, yes, you're right in that it could be talking about anything. :-)


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prasetio30 4 years ago from malang-indonesia

Beautiful poem and I am glad to know this from you. Thanks for share with us. Rated up and have a nice weekend :-)

Prasetio


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Nellieanna 4 years ago from TEXAS

Endings seem like darkness and 'The End' at the time, but they're inevitably also a beginning, once that cloud parts and one can again see the sun, which is still shining.


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ClarkParker 4 years ago from California, USA

What a beautiful poem! Voted up!


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

Thanks, Prasetio. You're so kind. Have a nice weekend, too!


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

Nellieanna--What a beautiful comment! Thanks!


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

Thanks so much, ClarkParker!


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rahul0324 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

Relations, may them be any... end in the way poetically described by you!

Nice Craft! As always

Painfully beautiful!


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Rosemay50 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

A beautiful but sad and poignant poem. We have all been there. Trouble is we never see the start of the end in order to preserve it, only the end when it is right there in front of us, too late.

Awesome poem and well expressed


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daisyflowrs 4 years ago from Richmond, VA

Specific "its" certainly end. The good ones are more painful. Great hub!


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Nellieanna 4 years ago from TEXAS

Thank you, Victoria!


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

rahul, I love your comments as always!


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Simply beautiful.. I love your poem.. blessing to you

sharing

Debbie


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

Thanks, Rosemay. So true--we don't see this at the front end. Insightful comment--love it.


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Bishopdown 4 years ago from Tampa, Florida

What a bitter sweet poem.


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

daisyflowers. Your comments are so right on! Thanks!


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

Nellieanna--You're welcome!


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

Debbie--thanks for the kind comments and for sharing!


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

Bittersweet like life is, Bishopdown. Thanks for reading and commenting!


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vocalcoach 4 years ago from Nashville Tn.

Victoria Lynn - What moving poetry you write! I read this three times. There is so much "meat" in every line.

You have a genuine gift for expressing that which is felt so deeply.

"Once light and alive--

flaming, unquenched,

rising with the sun,

and never setting . . .

and yet it ends.

Oh how I understand this and oh how I love these words.

Voting up and across, but not funny. Thank you!


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

vocalcoach--So much meat in every line! I love that comment. Thank you. And thanks for the votes. Good to see you!


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carmaluda 4 years ago from New Zealand

More thoughts captured by words that I can so relate to...

Voted up and I am going to follow you :o)


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

Thanks again, carmaluda! Much appreciated!


iamaudraleigh 4 years ago

What a great question with a great poem written by you Vicki! I applaud the writer! Voted up and shared!


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

Thanks, Audra! You rock! Thanks for sharing!


KDuBarry03 4 years ago

Well written poetry. Every line has its own dark emotion that plays well into the final line and question. Definitely a great poem :)

-KD


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Docmo 4 years ago from UK

Beautifully said, Victoria. There are some ends that are just ends, some that are beginnings pretending to be ends and some that are not ends but a mere pause - when the universe holds its breath. You have a talent for telling the deeper truths in dainty verses. Brilliant.


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

Thanks, KD. Such an insightful comment. Love it!


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

Docmo--I love your comment about "telling the deeper truths in dainty verses." Thank you. I love what you said about beginnings and endings, too. Very insightful.


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epigramman 4 years ago

so lovely and bittersweet is this - and you have really come into your own - as a great writer - and the highest hub score I ever received was '28' lol lol lol

lake erie time 1:20am


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA Author

Aw, Epi, I love your comments. Coming from a great poet such as you, saying I'm a great writer is a wonderful compliment. Thank you!

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