Dramatic Poetry Regarding Life

A Trip or Two and Fall

Oh pretense,
oh pure.
Alone and calmly demure
blinded in absence
of useless regard,
open a gateway of
life lines unbarred
by mysterious knocks
on a wall of doors.
Inching and slipping
down vacated floors.
Master universe shaking
by lights dimmed.
Under clouded silence
widen nailed defines
to escape modern morals
damaging innocent minds.


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jesusmyjoy 2 years ago from Bucyrus Ohio

amazing sis i love it.


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lisavanvorst 2 years ago from New Jersey

Beautifully written. I enjoy reading the poetry of others. Look forward to reading more.


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amiebutchko 2 years ago from Warwick, NY

This reminds me of why I so loved poetry when I was young and being educated, and why I love words to this day and how they can be strung together both melodically and drenched in some meaning that a reader can only guess at. I think we can all apply this to our own circumstance to find the meaning in our own lives pertaining to this beautiful lyric.


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Minnetonka Twin 2 years ago from Minnesota

I love the rhythm and smooth flow of the words. Beautiful writing.


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Denizee 2 years ago Author

Thank you everyone for your thoughts on this poem. It's an older piece of mine and I am humbled by all of your appreciation.


Tammie 2 years ago

i wish i could write as beautiful as you. Thank you for sharing


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Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Wonderful and expressive.

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