Dream Time Revelations (inspirational poetry)

Night time...day time...what knowledge gained...
Night time...day time...what knowledge gained...
In dreams...we may find our finest gains...for in the day...comes the storms and rains.
In dreams...we may find our finest gains...for in the day...comes the storms and rains.
Our greatest hope my rest in the very stars that sparkle in the night...
Our greatest hope my rest in the very stars that sparkle in the night...
As waves caress the sandy shores...so the dreams we have, nourish our own beckoning minds...
As waves caress the sandy shores...so the dreams we have, nourish our own beckoning minds...
The day to flee...the darkness flies...across the fields, in welcoming skies...
The day to flee...the darkness flies...across the fields, in welcoming skies...
conscious and unconscious thoughts to weave a pattern of brilliance...
conscious and unconscious thoughts to weave a pattern of brilliance...



Consciousness, and the unconsciousness...daylight to darkness, akin,

Conscious thoughts, an awareness, where our intelligence does begin.

In depths of night...where our dreams take flight, brilliance to transcend,

A recording mind, our human graphs, sublime, to rewrite it, over again.


The universal source...provides our voice...acquired and our inspiration,

Just as the composer, his musical score, prepares his grandest ovation.

True genius is ascribed, brightest thoughts described, our brains, to attest,

As waves caress fondest shores, all receive energy, radiant...we, at rest.


Leonardo da Vinci, Tesla, and Einstein...greater thinkers... knowledge, divine,

Mozart, Beethoven and Bach...musical geniuses...their compositions, to align.

Their works by day...envied by the best...products of the night, as minds, possessed.

Magical thoughts...brought to fruition, explode upon the page...as by wisest sage, obsessed.


Galactic minds...that owned by the meekest child...all their potential, escapes evolution,

Creativity, the root of greatest wisdom...sparked by stars, as we spin in our revolution.

Beyond the shadows, cast by the light of a Summer moon...what finest role, shall we play,

What are the depths... the capability, of the human equation... are we on this earth, to stay?



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What grandest accomplishments may we to make...in our own resilience...
What grandest accomplishments may we to make...in our own resilience...

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RJ Schwartz 16 months ago from Idaho Falls, Idaho

Love it as usual - deeply moving and thought stirring - blessed be!


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whonunuwho 16 months ago from United States Author

Thanks RJ and blessings on this warm Summer evening. whonu


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manatita44 16 months ago from london

Beautiful poem, Bro. Liked it a lot. Of course some of your words are so meaningful in a spiritual sense: Creativity, dream, wisdom, Consciousness ...let me add vision, imagination .... much love to you, Bro.


Kevin Goodwin 16 months ago

I enjoyed this poem very well written.


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whonunuwho 16 months ago from United States Author

My thanks to manatita44 and Kevin Goodwin for your nice review. wehonu


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whonunuwho 16 months ago from United States Author

oops. whonu


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CrisSp 16 months ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

"Creativity, the root of greatest wisdom...sparked by stars, as we spin in our revolution." -- love this line!

...and then the writer in hiatus begun to write again because of whonunuwho's inspirational poem.

Lovely as expected from a great poet and artist.


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Faith Reaper 16 months ago from southern USA

Beautifully stirring!

Up ++++ and sharing everywhere

Peace and blessings


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whonunuwho 16 months ago from United States Author

Thank you my friend and warmest blessings on this fine Summer morning. whonu


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bravewarrior 16 months ago from Central Florida

You've penned some beautiful phrases here, whonu. The ending leaves us with much to think about.


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whonunuwho 16 months ago from United States Author

Thanks my friend. Yes, we have much to think about and the limits are to infinity. whonu


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aviannovice 15 months ago from Stillwater, OK

Great thoughts, and even greater examples. What shall we each aspire to do next?


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whonunuwho 15 months ago from United States Author

Thanks aviannovice. whonu

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