Dreams on Hold....

Do yourself a favor...never an enabler be....

I will carry you....  ..........until you are able stand on your own....
I will carry you.... ..........until you are able stand on your own.... | Source

Dreams are thoughts from our mind..we must decide how to make them reality..

She wished for a Prince who rode a white horse...

So she went back to college to take a new course...

There she met a man who drove a green Pinto...

And had no idea where his life would go...

He had no intentions of working you see...

His wants and his needs he wanted for free...

They moved in together ..and she paid the bills..

He played online games and took many pills..

She worked two jobs while going to school....

Her friends told her often she was a fool....

But he needs me and I don’t want to be alone....

Besides I have created such a beautiful home...

The years flew by, and no changes were made..

She graduated with honors, and now had a trade..

At the firm of Morgan White... Attorney's at Law...

This was the beginning of the end and the last straw...

She had finally come to her senses you see...

Of her dreams and her wishes that were meant to be...

She now had her “ Morgan “ and her Prince you see... ?

** For those who are not aware.... a Morgan is a breed of horse...and the rest is history....

Comments 30 comments

Vickiw 3 years ago

Lovely Hub, complete with your dry sense of humour! I'm starting to really look forward to these!


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Wow, excellent hub here, and made me smile in the end! Wonder why there are so many enablers around? Really love reading your hubs, as they are so very clever and unique, just like you! Brilliant.

Voted up ++++ and sharing

God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida Author

vickiw..thank you for the compliment..my dry sense of humor has gotten me through many a rough situation and does help living/dealing with the " quirks " in life ..

welcome to my world of looking through " cracked rose coloured glasses "..hope you will check out some of my older writes...have a great Friday..


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida Author

Faith Reaper..glad I could make you smile...believe it or not I write as I perceive life around me..I have so many real life stories that trust me no one could make them up, some are beyond belief..40 years in medicine..and I'm still scratching my head..

thanks for the share...seize the day !


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bac2basics 3 years ago from Spain

Hi KJ. Couldn´t you just shake some people until they wake up and smell the bacon !! still at least the heroin in this little ditty came to her senses in the end. Love the photo of the mare and foal too :)


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Interesting and so beautifully expressed voted up!


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida Author

bac2basics..Some spend their whole life in a "stuper, " and NEVER wake-up..no matter what..but there are a few that eventually see the light..life is so short, no one should have to experience this..but..they do..thanks for the comment, glad you liked the photo...seize the day and savor every moment...


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida Author

DDE...Thank you for your words and the vote..I write it as I perceive it..enjoy your day..


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btrbell 3 years ago from Mesa, AZ

Great poem and message! Thank you! Up+


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida Author

btrbell..thank you for taking time out of your day to stop by to read and comment on my poem..deeply appreciated..and the Up+..enjoy your week-end....


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epigramman 3 years ago

I love the way you write dear KJ - you can't teach this at writing school - it's just a natural gift you have and of course hanging out with the epi-man doesen't hurt either - lol

You have so much style in your writing - and you own it - and we as your readers just love it.

Sending you big time hugs from Colin and his cats to you my friend -sent you a nice little letter

lake erie time canada 5:39pm


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida Author

epigramman..thank you for stopping by and commenting..your words of praise regarding my writing is deeply appreciated as you are a "mentor" here at HP...

Brrrr here tonight, going down to freeze temps again....sitting by the fireplace with my laptop...


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cherylone 3 years ago from Connecticut

I love the way you did this. I have seen so many relationships that are identical to this one and those who are being used just don't see it. Beautiful rendition. Voted up and beautiful.


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida Author

cherylone..thanks for stopping by...and the lovely comment..we finally got a beautiful rainy day, first in months......things are starting to green up already...


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Maralexa 3 years ago from Vancouver, Canada and San Jose del Cabo, Mexico

Beautiful, kj! How many of us wait, hoping others will change to match our expectations or our dreams. So happy she made her own dream come true.

PS: a morgan is also a beautiful British car. Having a morgan was one of my dreams. I have not been able to make this dream come true. Yet.


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida Author

Maralexa...My youngest daughter is a firm believer in put pictures of what you want in life on a cork board..and look at them every day and smile as though you already had them...and they will come to you in time..IT has worked for her...JUST KEEP the FAITH...thanks for visiting and commenting....


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DREAM ON 3 years ago

Interesting as always loved the ending.


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MrsBrownsParlour 3 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

Hello, I was sent your way by Epigramman....I like this one! Funny and smart....be your own white knight. :-)


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida Author

MrsBrownsParlour...Thank you so much for stopping by...and hope you will visit some of my other writes, as I write about life and its perks and " quirks.... " and sometimes even the jerks...see you soon..have a great day....


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Linda Compton 3 years ago from The Land of Enchantment

Hey KJ,

Where to start? I absolutely ADORE your photo. I'd love to make a greeting card of that image for you if you like. It is stunning and precious all at the same time. And your hub - poignant, illustrative, and hopeful. Love Morgans! Voted WAY UP!!!! L.


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida Author

Linda Compton....How ironic..my G-D did just that...for her cousin, who is a student at a Vet school in Colorado....thanks for the vote-up...


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Linda Compton 3 years ago from The Land of Enchantment

Excellent! So glad she did!!! It is a wonderful image!


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epigramman 3 years ago

Good morning my dear KJ - how are you feeling today - how is your family? I had good news for my birthday which is tomorrow on Sunday and my doctor said my heart is fine just a low potassium level - he said that I must eat more bananas with KJ in her pool and enjoy the good life , so yes it's true after that crazy week of being in the ER for one day - all is well with my health - I just have to watch my blood pressure and stress levels and take my new potassium pill.

I love your narrative style of poetry writing - it always combines your fine wit and philosophy and your unique sense of story telling - please write more if you can, I find it inspiring and it always captivates me as your loyal friend and reader.

Sending you warm wishes from Colin , Tiffy and Gabriel at lake erie time canada 12:25pm


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida Author

Epigramman....Thank you so much for dropping by , sorry the house was in such disarray , the plumber was supposed to be here yesterday....hope you enjoyed the Snickerdoodle cookies and Ginger/Clove tea. Glad to know you are feeling better and it's only a low Potassium level. I will send an e-mail with some info......Happy Birthday friend...


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PHILLYDREAMER 3 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

I assume the boyfriend was disposed of by the usual means. Is this another gator bait advert? LOL.


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida Author

PHILLYDREAMER....." Gator Bait " is a very special place that handles special issues...a " lazy man " is not a serious matter , not like mean and abusive, both emotional and physical...also he will be responsible for his own demise, as he will starve to death ,due to the fact no one is there to see after his needs....hehehehe...no money out of pocket on this one...


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peachpurple 21 months ago from Home Sweet Home

great hub, the mummy and baby foal looks cute and heart warming.


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kj force 21 months ago from Florida Author

thank you for stopping by and taking the time to comment...hope you seek out my other writes..have a great day..


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sgbrown 20 months ago from Southern Oklahoma

Love the poem! My daughter was in a situation similar to this and finally came to her senses. I don't understand why some women fall for this type of man, I guess they are unusually charming and put up a good front.


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kj force 20 months ago from Florida Author

sgbrown... glad you loved the poem... most of my writes have to do with my " mind solutions " regarding what is known as co-dependency, suffered by both sexes... but frequently more women... I am a firm believer in justification.. kudos to your daughter. better late than .never. Have a great week........

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