Dream We Shared (poem)

Another dream we shared last night

We held for some kisses invite

We danced for the starlight’s delight

And there in this time all was right

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And there every thought was of you

Every song in the breeze knew it too

Each heartbeat repeated it’s true

This secret that everything knew

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Here we were that warm glow mid night

The whispered enchantment cast too

The wishes of spring had come true

And there in this kiss all was right

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And as my dreams drifted in you

Was something we didn’t invite

Some jealous wind challenged delight

And threatened the world that we knew

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We wandered in search of what’s right

Through shadows which held our delight

Another dance we chanced invite

Another dream we shared last night

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Diana Lee 4 years ago from Potter County, Pa.

This poem would make good song lyrics. Beautiful poem, Mhatter99.


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eHealer 4 years ago from Las Vegas

Mhatter, this is very lyrical and could be put to music! Beautiful... love it. Voted up and shared!


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Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

Very beautiful and I agree with Diana, it would make great song lyrics. In His Love, Faith Reaper


Janhorner 4 years ago

Lovely poem. Dreams that sometimes come true and others that leave us mystified as to what they were all about! I instantly thought of Roy Orbison's In Dreams; which is a favourite of mine.

This poem is beautifully written and I also agree it would sound really good to music.

Jan


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Wow I agree this would make a beautiful song blessings .....Debbie


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sweethearts2 4 years ago from Northwest Indiana

Amazing poem and perfect video. This Dream We Shared is indeed a song.


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midget38 4 years ago from Singapore

Should be a song, like all the rest are saying!! Thanks, hatter.


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LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

Wow, everyone thought this should be a song, but the first thing that came to my mind was Fairytales!! :)) I must be weried.......

This was beautiful, a beautiful dream and the poem too. Enjoyed it, voting up!


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

And time stands still for the beauty in this night...


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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

A wonderfully romantic piece---


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Glimmer Twin Fan 4 years ago

Just beautiful mhatter...


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ImKarn23 4 years ago

was it a dream..a fantasy...a reality? Your poetry is just sooo...readable and unique, M!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

So lovely and lyrical.


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

I love how this poem flows. Kind of like the rhythm in a dance?

Voted up and beautiful.

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