Dream's Desire

My dream has a desire

That she can't conceal

She tosses and turns

To make it come real

In deep sleep she feels

A million years away

The night's her playground

Where she can play

The flood of desire

Overpowers her

Breaking her walls

The moon and stars

Can't break her fall

She meets many faces

And sees many smiles

Only to wake up again

To her daily trials


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gjfalcone 4 years ago from Gilbert, Arizona

Beautiful,Awesome


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Perspycacious 4 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

Keep on keeping on; you're on a roll!


The Fastionista 4 years ago

Another awesome poem, Caroline - I love how the rhythm plays just like a lullabye. Very soothing, and yet there's an almost ominous note with the last two lines that makes me wonder just what those daily trials are... Very nicely done - voted up and beautiful!


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cherylone 4 years ago from Connecticut

A beautiful poem. I was tossing and rolling along with the words. Thank you so much for sharing yet another beautiful poem. :)


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Cara.R 4 years ago from New York

So lovely Caroline, as always. I want her to go back to sleep :) and see what else happens.


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Jspot 4 years ago from Flames of water and love

Beautiful portrait of living a dream so lovely. Picture is amazing as well. Voted up


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

Welcome Caroline , yes it's all in perfect context and the great Bob Marley said so , you running and you running and you running away , but you can't run away from yourself.

That's why who feels it knows it. Beautiful picture.

Good to see you and a conscious poem to start.

Bless.


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

simply beautiful this is my kind of poetry.. I am so glad I am following you.. I voted up and beautiful

Debbie


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Enigmatic Me 4 years ago from East Coast Canada

I like the symmetry between words and image... well delivered.


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

i just want to remain dreaming...and dreaming...beautiful and evocative...


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SubRon7 4 years ago from eastern North Dakota

Good stuff, Caroline. But that's the trouble with happy dreams, we always wake up again to reality. But right now I wouldn't change a thing.


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sweethearts2 4 years ago from Northwest Indiana

The desires of our dreams and our daily trails sometimes extremes of each other. They do however feed each other giving possibilities to both. I also read and enjoyed

You Will Dance In Heaven with Me and will be back to read more. Voted up and beautiful.


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mathira 4 years ago from chennai

You do have awesome depth in your poem carolinemd21.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

That was simply fantastic love that pic at the beginning. It makes you want to look at it while reading this poem.


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

@ GJ Thank you for stopping by and reading!

@ Perspy thanks for the encouragement.

@ Fashionista Thank you for the kind words. I'm glad you liked it and for your vote!

@ Cheryl thank you always good to see you. Glad you liked it. :)

@ Cara thank you good to see you again! I might write a part two of her dreams. :)

@ Jspot coming from a great poet like you an honor. Thanks for your comment. :)

@ Sky thank you you're comments from the beginning encourage me a lot. I'll come by your page soon. :)

@ Deborah thank you coming from a romantic poet like you means a lot.

@ Enigmatic thank you, I'm glad you liked my poem. :)

@ Raciniwa thank you, you're comments always make me smile.

@ SubRon thanks for the comment. Sometimes the dreams are so good you don't want to wake up! Always appreciate your stopping by. I'll be going to your page soon.

@ Sweethearts Thank you I'm so glad you like my poems. :)

@ Mathira thank you! Your comments always inspire.

@ Gypsy thank you, I'm glad you liked it!


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Minnetonka Twin 4 years ago from Minnesota

caroline-Isn't dreaming great? You can have so many adventures, meet so many people. I agree that waking up to reality can be tough.


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Minnetonka I think so too. Sometimes it is really tough waking up. lol. Thanks for reading always good to see you!


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Teylina 4 years ago

Awesome write! The pic was enough to pull one into it, but, oh, what a beautiful poem on dreaming! Isn't it fab!??! (At least when they're even close to this!) Thanks for sharing.


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tom hellert 4 years ago from home

C21,

I am soo onboard... Sleep totally rocks...

The best cure for insomnia-WC fields

and Anyone can escape into sleep, we are all geniuses when we dream, the butcher's the poet's equal there.

Emile M. Cioran

"I like sleep, it keeps me from getting tired" Tom Hellert age 6

TH


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Cracknutcase 4 years ago from India,bangalore

Your words paint a beautiful picture.

Thanks for sharing


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

@ Hi Teylina, thanks for stopping by and leaving your lovely comments. I am glad you liked it. I will be stopping by your page too.:)

@ Tom lol I love your quote. And from age 6 wow! You have a great memory! I love sleep can't deny it. Always good to see you and your funny comments.

@ Cracknutcase thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :)


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Senoritaa 4 years ago

Nice read Caroline. Simple and deep.


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saddlerider1 4 years ago

I loved the energy, the imagery and the rhythm of this wonderful piece. Up awesome and beautiful.


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

@ Hi Senoritaa I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for stopping by. Always good to see you.

@ Saddlerider Thank you very much! Coming from an awesome poet like you means a lot.


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adriatk 4 years ago from USA

I love this! The slow rhythm only adds to its bittersweet emotion.


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you adriak!


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

Damn it, I just found this. I love it.

You are still the best .and you are still beautiful.

If I wasn't married I would ask you to marry me.


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

LOL Thanks Michael for the compliment. :)


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tom hellert 4 years ago from home

C21,

my memory suxs on new stuff but-old stuff- I seem to remember more stuff the older it goes...

;)

TH

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